otherwise

forays

Thursday, July 23, 2009

Reading this Sunday

This Sunday, at 2 p.m., Jennifer Karmin and Andy Gricevich will give a poetry reading at Avol's Bookstore. It will be a blast.

Jennifer Karmin is the author of the text-sound epic Aaaaaaaaaaalice (Flim Forum Press, forthcoming 2009). She curates the Red Rover Series and is a founding member of the public art group Anti Gravity Surprise. Her multidisciplinary projects have been presented nationally at festivals, artist-run spaces, and on city streets. Jennifer teaches creative writing to immigrants at Truman College and works as a Poet in Residence for the Chicago Public Schools. Recent poems are published in the journals Cannot Exist, MoonLit, Otoliths, and anthologized in Come Together: Imagine Peace (Bottom Dog Press), Not A Muse (Haven Books), and The City Visible: Chicago Poetry for the New Century (Cracked Slab Books).

Andy Gricevich is uncomfortably writing this in the third person. He's a poet, actor, theater director and musician whose work occasionally finds the time to get itself published here and there. He spent much of the last four years melding political theater and experimental music with the Nonsense Company, and performing satirical cabaret songs with the Prince Myshkins. Andy edits Cannot Exist, a print poetry magazine put lovingly together in his living room in Madison, Wisconsin. He very rarely, and with extensive discomfort, blogs at ndgwriting.blogspot.com.

http://www.avolsbooks.com

Friday, May 01, 2009

I got way behind on the posts here while preparing for my April 25th reading in the Red Rover series (Chicago--more on it later). I have, however, kept the read-a-book/write-a-poem -a-day project up to the extent that I read 23 books in April, finishing all but 3--and wrote well over 26 poems, some of them, I think, pretty decent. I'll be trying to post the poems and blurbs (backdated) on the books here over the next week or so, but for now, here's the list of N-Z:

Pablo Neruda, The Book of Questions
Ovid, Metamorphoses (didn't quite finish)
Bob Perelman, 7 Works
[no Q]
Kit Robinson, Covers
Ron Silliman, VOG
Rodrigo Toscano, Collapsible Poetics Theater (didn't quite finish)
[no U]
Cesar Vallejo, Spain, Take this Cup from Me
Keith and Rosmarie Waldrop, Flat With No Key
[no X]
William Butler Yeats, The Wind Among the Reeds
Louis Zukofsky, 80 Flowers

All in all, a fine trip through a bunch of mostly great stuff I hadn't read before.

Wednesday, April 22, 2009

Red Rover Series
{readings that play with reading}

Experiment #28:
It's Voyeuristic

SATURDAY, APRIL 25th
7pm

Featuring:
Carrie Olivia Adams & Andy Gricevich

NEW LOCATION
at the Orientation Center
2129 N. Rockwell -- Chicago, IL
corner of Milwaukee/Rockwell
left side of the Congress Theater building
http://orientationcenter.wordpress.com
suggested donation $4

CARRIE OLIVIA ADAMS lives and works in Chicago, where she also serves as poetry editor for Black Ocean and Hunger Mountain. Her poems and reviews have appeared in such journals as Backwards City Review, Cranky, DIAGRAM, Lilies and Cannonballs Review, and Verse. She is the author of Intervening Absence, published by Ahsahta Press and the chapbook, “A Useless Window.”

ANDY GRICEVICH is uncomfortably writing this in the third person. He's a poet, actor, theater director and musician whose work occasionally finds the time to get itself published here and there. He spent much of the last four years melding political theater and experimental music with the Nonsense Company, and performing satirical cabaret songs with the Prince Myshkins. Andy edits Cannot Exist, a print poetry magazine put lovingly together in his living room in Madison, Wisconsin. He very rarely, and with extensive discomfort, blogs at ndgwriting.blogspot.com.

Red Rover Series is curated by Lisa Janssen and Jennifer Karmin. Each event is designed as a reading experiment with participation by local, national, and international writers, artists, and performers. The series was founded in 2005 by Amina Cain and Jennifer Karmin.

UPCOMING
May 9th - Lisa Fishman & Aurora Tabar

Email ideas for reading experiments
to us at redroverseries@yahoogroups.com

The schedule for upcoming events is listed at
http://groups.yahoo.com/group/redroverseries

Saturday, April 18, 2009

things keep turning
into other things
such as lots

in which you
can turn on
a dime (barring

inflation) I'm
still wearing
my helmet



****

quoth the raven nearly nightly
"I'm a bird of some repute.
If you from my mouth won't take it
You will find it on your suit."



****


Today I tried to finish Ovid's Metamorphoses and failed. I've been reading it for a while. It's as good as it's supposed to be. The best poetry, I think, is in the descriptions (the place where a thing occurred). Weird stories.

Thursday, April 16, 2009

If you are some kind of wind--and you probably are--some kind of partnership is forming with the jealous tendons, see the bulb filament its way out hat. I stopped it here because it could not. Every poem is an instance of memory, also of getting in the way. The yaks wanted their revenge on the world through linebreaks. I will give up all my bulges for you, but not the gnawing insect of my heart. Its bell rings always at horizons without register. A package awaits me under the empty sign, should I die a cushion or the persistent narrative manner of a polluted stream. Question.


*****


Today's reading: Pablo Neruda's The Book of Questions. I still haven't read much Neruda, and this late book piques my curiosity. Something a bit like an alternate Whitman in the use of repeating form (each poem composed of four or five questions, each question almost always a couplet), though the alternative is extreme (the question as contrasted with Whitman's declarative mode). Each poet employs constancy to get a wider range of possible material in than might seem possible without the formal strategy--the poem would "break" (which has an interest of its own). Neruda's questions range from jokes to childlike playfulness to surrealist impossibility to existential and political crisis. Why do I so rarely hear anyone talk about his work in the circles to which I pay attention? That fact, as well, makes me curious.

Wednesday, April 15, 2009

TWO MINUTE POEM

Some kind of artifact in a
suit walks in
around the wall where Hikmet
is held
shackles are a coconut
without amusement
without amount
for no particular reason
a raisin in the sun
explodes
songing weaves
abolish the heated sun


For today I almost finished the Mayer book. It's the first volume I haven't managed to complete this month, and I'll have to come back to it in what I expect to be a few "free days." Everyone who's read Mayer knows how good she is. My favorite pieces are the verse poems, many of them, especially toward the middle of the book. I like, in the prose works, the places where she, in the midst of immense catalogues of dailiness, hits on an extended historical or literary anecdote or description of a plant, etc.--the way those extended passages alter the rhythm of the work. Nearly everything about this writing is inspiring in the best sense: the palpability of the language, the stunningly prolific writing life, the devotion to it and the acceptance of poverty and uncertainty as part of that devotion. There's no better example.

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Tuesday, April 14, 2009

impatience

impatience impatience

i should learn
to recognize it
like a botanist

plants need attention
they have no eye

*

cows rub up against ogam inscriptions
erasing their dumb letters lowing

*

A poem should not bean
but me
Claudius
carving meself
of wood
a hole
to try
rye
in


I'm reading the Bernadette Mayer Reader, but didn't finish it today. April, fortunately, has more days than the alphabet has letters, so I can take an extra day once or twice to get through a book--especially when it's longish.

Monday, April 13, 2009

where to house
that lone thought

little pieces of hail
--memory slips--

fall on
and on

an un
finished basket

like a big spider

neither will ever
be a bone

people I know are going
are a loss of stories

big wars
with dumb drones

cover over
the daily thirst

to live between
moments of thirst

and state

over the dead
who've stopped
wanting

Machaut, though
seems a guarantee

or a promise
without guarantee

as the thought is a promise,
the thought that

got lost.


2
Then there's the thing I said
instead of asking how you were
when I knew the answer was "bad,"
though it's not the answer you'd have given
had I asked. Accidentally
I pushed the button in my pocket
and Machaut burst into my ear
as if someone were calling from
an impossible distance, near and far,
in which the thought got lost.


Today's reading: Andrew Levy's Memories of My Father, another book whose excellence I'm not sure I can explain here. The book centers doubly around memories belonging to and memories about its main subject. When it's closest to literal description (especially of the hospital as the father is dying), the point of view seems to shift between that of the author and that of the father (tilting, for example, around the "gaze" and the father's complaint (?) that everyone is looking at him). The main thrust of the book, however, is the enactment, in poetic thought, of Levy's father's ethical nature, of the relation of memory to ethics, the taking in of ethical substance through memory and the process, through writing, of keeping memory active, preserving its verbal sense (remembering, an ongoing reincorporation and renegotiation) against its freezing into a noun (a container for past images). This ethical memory spreads to address economics and war, the resonances between the Depression and the war the father was in and today's circumstances. And, returning again and again, there's the question of why one writes, and what, and how. The doubt contained in this question is a positive doubt; Levy's book is, among other things, composed of answers.

(It's especially moving for me to read it as part of the sequence of books from the last few days, to connect and contrast its humanity with the kinds of humanity in and behind Iijima, Jeffers, and Koch, their different kinds of attention and their relations to the living and the dead, these embodied social presences. Something about love.)

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Sunday, April 12, 2009

stick not,
little tots

(pint error)
(lobed stump)

races expel
or insert rats

plat maps
to a cinder

expensive friends
latrine orchestra

hornets scrape

___________________


THE REDNESS EXPERT

sometimes it's messy
sometimes it's May [Mary?]

there is a curved [carved?] dark lie
where prisons have been won
in the "heart"

scrap, or
chin rattler
expenses

eat your inner orchestra
return to cinder

we advocate renown
via experiences in date race

cud hat seen in finest places
(crass resin expert love)

secret rat pulses
hated since 1957


Today's reading: Kenneth Koch's The Pleasures of Peace. What an antithesis to Robinson Jeffers, especially in the concluding title poem. Koch's poetry will never be a model for me, but his glee in writing, his energy--well, everyone who's read him knows about it. He is an inspiration as a writer. I love the moments in the list poems (like "Faces") where he seems to realize he can write anything he wants, and then does it--he can refer to anything as having a face, and say anything he can think of about it. And why not have a poem like "The Pleasures of Peace," which itself exemplifies one brilliant set of facets of the humanism we would like to have? His writing, which I've not been strongly attracted to for some time, keeps taking me by surprise in how far from shallow it can really be.

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Saturday, April 11, 2009

Moments hang,
linger

to return.
Each chair is a gift.

The sun
we'll turn
from

in passion

curves wood
to make the string
like speech

--which these
people pour

"that they may hear."


This is simply a bit of notation made while waiting for a performance of Bach's St. Matthew Passion, a great thing to hear live, on period instruments, with two small orchestras, two small choirs plus a small children's choir, organ, and harpsichords. The introductory lecturer claimed that the baroque bow, with the curvature of its wood away from the strings--the opposite of the modern bow--mimics the consonant-vowel sequence of speech (since it produces a strong initial articulation, immediately tapering into smoothness--as opposed to the modern bow's "all-vowel" character, which matches the irritating lack of diction in most operatic performance). The music was magnificent, especially the extraordinarily strange, sparse arias in the second half, which I'd never really dug into. I thought, of course, of Louis Zukofsky, though I didn't come home and start writing "A."

Today's reading: Robinson Jeffers' Selected Poems, the small, older edition published by Vintage. I've been meaning to read Jeffers for some time. I think he may be the most depressing poet I've ever read. Over and over there's the assertion that humankind is done for, and good riddance, the urge that we not speak about atrocity, but merely observe the idiocy of slaughter, starvation and willful ignorance as dispassionately as possible. Where many poets during and since the second World War have written that we can't speak about atrocity--that language can't encompass its magnitude--and many poets today say that we shouldn't because "it's bad for poetry," Jeffers urges us not to out of an ethical (though highly misanthropic) conviction. His most positive thought is the assertion that new culture can only arise from the burning and bloodbath of a decaying civilization. In contrast to the sarcasm and the ultimately bored, cynical jokesterism that usually accompany the antipolitical in the poetry world, Jeffers is dead serious, facing horror in poems that are often very good, nearly always gripping.

I wrote three "mirrors" in opposition to this stance, but they didn't turn out well, and so their implicit argument seemed to be "don't waste time writing against other writers who say we shouldn't, or can't, speak out." Maybe that's right, in some sense.

There's a powerful respect for nonhuman nature in Jeffers' work, but--in contrast to Iijima (see yesterday's post)--the gulf between the human and the nonhuman is vast, and the idea of crossing it is both dismissed and condemned. The radical indifference of hawks, stones and especially the ocean to our humanity is essential, for Jeffers, to what's powerful in it. It's a radical nonhumanity that I find philosophically attractive, except that I also see it as liberating, instead of connected to nihilistic misanthropy. I can certainly see what Jack Spicer saw in Jeffers. This is a poet whose work should, I think, be read by anyone who feels a crisis in relation to the question of political poetry--he presents problems to be dealt with. A worthy adversary.



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Friday, April 10, 2009

1
you never even hear about ford anymorelock
fjord
dam (a bird just fell
lock
ford
ford
afford
afford
can't afford
can't afford to eat
little light speckled the wall
the bay
leaves in the light
logic without body
can handle this
two dollars
a day
would make it moot
moat
afloat
float
not drown

in the absurdity of starvation,
which no-one can acknowledge.

Starvation isn't hunger.
Not required.
Unrequited.
A diamond
Day
Has emerged around the nests
And sticks
To the bricks
Blinds hang
High

Somewhere there are birds
Looked to for longing
When length is a dash
then another dash, the punct

uation
of unshelter


2
A small bunny goes by in a red car
collaring any attention like a flag
then sinking in the waves

It made us laugh:
a day of invisible stars
jammed into series
by the girl whose sweaters,
flying around the room to dry,
were unemployed as she


In that uselessness
lies
turn true

or something like true
would be
were there no lies.

lies are grains cast
by tons into the sea.


3
their
boats
I
read
of
fires
dumb
flame,
name

them.



That's another improvisation, certainly in need of revision, or discarding. The point, I remind you, is to write a poem a day, and to post it in spite of embarrassment.

Today's reading: Brenda Iijima's Rabbit Lesson. It's good political poetry. Remarkable what she does, starting with the scared rabbit and the fox, wolf, bird of prey, leading from that into war scenarios and then on into strange and complex territory
. The book takes animality seriously, never demoting the rabbit/predator situation to the status of metaphor for war. Each not only illuminates, but interpenetrates the other. It's about the body, with its guts, gaze, attention, response. It's not protest poetry; its compassion is in giving each thing it examines its due, trying to see clearly what it is. (This is all pretty vague--I'm in a hurry today). Iijima's use of the page is magnificent: lots of sculpted space, the density of text varied with thoughtful composition, and here and there light grey words in a much larger font floating near or behind the main text, variations on certain of its moments or beginnings of thought that would move in a different direction. It's very precise: neither the open fields of "vispo" nor the page scoring of Charles Olson or Susan Howe (where we seem to get fragments of something lost), but the movement of attention coming repeatedly into being--and an ethics of attentiveness that comes along with it.

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Thursday, April 09, 2009

AGAINST SPECIAL MOMENTS

Why I wake Mary O early
I will never know

I do not--for enrichment--own
the slightest view, nor its

window


*

fulfillment capital

surplus enrichment


*

(two poems that each need a second section)

1
Lobed, mellow
agreement.

Three shots
"rang

out." Blue
corps.

Add the
"e"

of the
air.


2
"More to be revealed"
said the white block
in the dark pool

You have to watch
reruns

for that.
The organizational

functions.
Loss on the vertigo-

danced horizon
of calm.


*

addenda

says the chimera

_______

laced
..........tide

_______

show your stock
a good time

bond, age, cow
(tick) talk

_______

feed us this crow
.
we don't know stones


***********

Today's reading: Carla Harryman's Open Box (improvisations). It's a great book. The form is highly liberating, and suggests valuable possibilities for writing to me. Each page consists of two four-line stanzas, with plenty of white space around them. The pairs most often seem like independent poems, but often the last line carries over syntactically into the first line of the next page, and themes recur at various points, so the book ends up reading like a very loose set of serial poems of varying lengths--or one book-length work. The way it can function formally in multiple ways thrills me--particularly the way this allows multiple simultaneous scales to work, often in friction with each other. The details (individual lines and stanzas) are generally stunning. The poems above, aside from being improvisations, have little to do with Harryman's book.

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Wednesday, April 08, 2009

unmanned drones

pretending to be unmanned drones


*


I sing the body acoustic.
In this field, where becoming's pushed to such a speed
that we are robbed of the experience, the observation,
the sensation of change, and can only note that it has passed,

I write: POEM FOR--
--not a blank to be filled, but a direction of dedication, the possible
and the actual on equal terms.

The pretense here: I have not written such a poem.


For each stone from an old, old wall
meant not to mark territory, to make as permanent
as can withstand coldly the laughter at such pretense
the division within and between possible communities,

meant in quiet, forward-looking and defiant stead
to bank up the root place of the olive grove,

for each such stone--no longer in, but from--
and for the power to imagine, in each,
the memory of one now torn tree

--for each such stone a poem.


A lousy poem. Really notes toward a possible poem, for Palestine, or elsewhere. I am reading John Berger's Hold Everything Dear the best book of essays I've come across in some time. Dark, condensed responses to atrocity in the last nine years. Great writing, owing a good deal to Benjamin or the Adorno of Minima Moralia, or maybe not "owing"--it doesn't seem imitative, just unflinching and rich in similar ways.

Today's reading: Barbara Guest's The Blue Stairs. Guest's sense of form was phenomenal. I'm particularly struck by the title poem, and by the two in the middle entitled "The Return of the Muses" and "A Reason." There's a great variety here. As with many of the real "masters," I get the sense, in trying to figure out what it might have been like to write a given poem, that she "just did it," followed her compositional sense without question, but with an ongoing critical observation. It's not that there's any "ease" to the writing, or that it's particularly easy or difficult) to read--in fact, it's often upsetting, or thrilling in a kind of scary way--but that the poems seem so unapologetically what they are. Much to be learned from more reading of Guest.

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Tuesday, April 07, 2009

The melon hides
the head
in wood. So what

is just
a faded
Should.

The new hot
pan in town
bordered by

holes. What did
the bleeding get
out. what did

you think, drink
at stars, a flagging
hoarse and guided

stab.



Today's reading: Norman Fischer's Charlotte's Way, in the beautiful edition from Tinfish Press (one long fold-out sheet, put together so well that I didn't see the seams until I was looking for them). I've found it hard to get incredibly excited about Fischer's work, but the straightforward, observant humility of this long poem makes me certain I'll come back to it for a second try. Its way of mapping daily experience and thought is an interesting contrast to Larry Eigner's.

I also read around a little in Benjamin Friedlander's The Missing Occasion of Saying Yes. I feel a strong kinship with Friedlander. His way of disrupting the poem, to fracture the smoothness in short lyrics, to introduce swift turns that send the energy of the poem off in unexpected directions, is something a lot of poets could learn from. I think he's at his best when he's not trying too hard to be "wrong"--I don't have any problem with obscenity, fecal matter, and so on, but it's less striking in his work than the other forms of disruptiveness there.

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Monday, April 06, 2009

In

in

...here

....................n't


*


in

wood

does

...............nt
...................................................t
.....................................................read


*


in
....where we
....stayed
..................................................NO DREAM
t......................................................................?
........................................it
stead

............................................niggling
stand
............................................length


*


nope, loop

soucience

soup


*


....................................property


sky

................at rest

........................................blue
........................................is its
........................................remainder
.................................rent


*


innit
................................you <------->it

................stant
............................mix
........................................t


*


........................surrounds


three songs
crow pass
es hawk
in air
or wall
nut not
bud ed
........yet


*


duce

(in de

patch

blotch


*


or of


*


in chinese
no spell
spill it
....o.u.t.

............................................to


*


form to
......give ............................sub
................................ord.....in.....ate


*


to the time not taken (took):

there is this false sense of own




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Today's reading: Larry Eigner's Readiness / Enough / Depends / Upon. Eigner is best taken in large doses, entire books of whatever length. What seem to be notations of the arrangements of objects, the drift of phenomena into constellations over a span of time (the poems often seem to be written in a very short time--or, more often, over two days, which is fascinating for such brief works), turns out to work on the border between that sort of descriptive notation and a notation of constellations of pieces of language. External phenomena and the language that refers to them begin in strict analogy, then drift apart to varying degrees. And the subject matter drifts and shifts in surprising ways, so that we go from frequent descriptions of weather, trees, streets, sights and sounds to jokes, meditations, responses to other writing, even one pretty dark poem of historical atrocity. I wrote today's poem while about halfway through the book, after which I found, at the beginning of a longer Eigner poem dated 10.26-7.93:

...............................o n e o r t w o
in............................t h i n g s c a n b e
(to)....................................s p e c u l a t e d
an
empty
sky
surrounding
so
many

Sunday, April 05, 2009

The sexual skeleton is cloyingly at wait
on the divan of darkly vandalized love.

A tarpaulin seen from two irreconcilable angles
can only have died in its sleep, too much on sale.

Kept printing out JAZZ MONKEY from the white ticker
tape machine erasing moss from a midget, page 15, raw cheat
pump deft
geisha chic
crop gran
it ick
lops side
sicle donor
hot butt
on invest
I equate it with great deeds
to put walnuts on the skin
of one's victims. She bangs an
egg against the bill of sale,
the boards that have replaced
Citizen Three with panel flips.


I'm trying to read a book of poems each day. Many, but not all, are short. Today's is Beverly Dahlen's A Reading: Spicer and 18 Sonnets. Many of my daily poems will be in some sense "imitations" of the day's reading. I don't see how I could imitate Dahlen without taking decades to do so. This one is closer to Bruce Andrews, I think.

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Saturday, April 04, 2009

The melon hides
the head in
wood. So What

is just
a faded
Should.

The new hot
thing in towns
wrecked by

holes. A pleasure what
the blood got out. What

did you think, drink at stars,
a flagging house, a hoarse and
guided starve, a stab. A vine,

o vine, you most
certainly are not.


Today's reading: Robert Creeley's Words.

Friday, April 03, 2009

Are you ready to become the man
you came here to be? Why do I present
this ironic facade, instead of asking
a genuine question? What is the question?
Why is it marked thus? What's the history
of that mark?

Is that a lotus behind my head? How far
from the last question to the last one? Am I
just happy to see me? Why do these questions
keep spiraling off, instead of delving deeper?
Why do I want deeper delving? Are the sexual
possibilities lost on me? Is that a real question?
What was the question? What was the gap?

What is performance? Does it involve that
tight feeling in the throat? That lonely olive
on the shelf? The presence of anything? Huh?
What? Paint? Tea? Stop now?


This poem, which fails somewhat miserably, owes its inspiration to today's reading: Steve Benson's Open Clothes. Benson's improvisations, all of which seem to involve the setting up of situations of vulnerability, uncertainty, probable embarassment and a great deal of brilliant surprise, are a recent inspiration to me. I've been meaning to really delve into his work for years, and this most recent book has me hooked. It'd be an interesting job to compare Benson's long sequences of questions with the questions that make up Ron Silliman's "Sunset Debris."

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Thursday, April 02, 2009

THIS SPACE

Leaves
........................................sharpen
.......................................................the mode.
Takes.

Nude, formed, found, near-
..........................................Edgelessly?

"If you want the lens, buy the eye!"

who becomes the swell in cloud mass

(after "The Dark" in Rae Armantrout's The Invention of Hunger, which I'd not read as a book before today. This poem, like the other two I don't remember having seen collected elsewhere, is particularly chilling and strange).

Also in today's reading: Bruce Andrews' Executive Summary (I'm reading "A's" today, starting the alphabet). It collects early works that make me remember why I like the guy's writing so much. The language is packed, hilarious, full of crackly context-readiness (as in "moss from a midget").

Wednesday, April 01, 2009

ok, a poem a day for the month of april

after Duncan

come back
as if
made up

I is
not mine

but makes
what is

by delimit:
walls shadow

and that's how we know
where we are


I'm a box
of bones,

their shapes
imitations

of the way
words always squirm
inside words

so that they don't
mean what they mean. they blanket the
squirming things.

I remember--enfold--at freeze--bent grass
in wind. I own it, but don't
own I. That is

the first persimmon. O mensch. O my.

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Friday, February 27, 2009

Cannot Exist no.4

I haven't even mentioned here that Cannot Exist no.4 is out.

SEGUE put on a great launch reading at the Bowery Poetry Club in NYC a month ago.
Lots of people, lots of energy, many compliments on the magazine that made its editor proud.
A reading experiment: assume that every part of a text is thoroughly referential. In the case of, say, a text by Stein, what name can we give to the experience to which such a text refers?

Wednesday, December 31, 2008

I'm thinking this New Year's Eve Day of a lot of people, especially those friends with whom I regularly fail to correspond. And people I don't know at all, especially the people of Palestine, suffering from decades of slower and faster murder, and now a declared war for which the turning of the year will make little difference.

I wish you all the best, and hope for the transformation of the old Chinese curse--that we live in interesting times--into a blessing.

Thursday, December 25, 2008

Lists

Just for fun, I've been trying to list the books I read this year (counting only those I've finished, or come so close to finishing that it might as well count). Comparing it to 2007's year-end list, it seems kind of paltry. A number of factors are to blame, not the least of which has been my editing of Cannot Exist, which has taken up a great deal of reading time. It's been a great year for poetry publications, though; the stack of various writers' Collecteds is a great thing to have around. 2009 will be a serious reading year.

Eileen Myles, Sorry, Tree
Bob Dylan, The Essential Interviews
Hart Crane, White Buildings and The Bridge
Anne Boyer, The Romance of Happy Workers and Art is War
Bob Perelman, Primer* and To the Reader*
Barrett Watten, Opera--Works*
Ludwig Wittgenstein, Tractatus Logico-Philosophicus (finally, after a decade of rereading half of it)
Ron Silliman, The Alphabet (letters A-O, most of them rereads) and Ketjak*
Cesar Vallejo, Trilce (in Clayton Eshleman's heartbreakingly wonderful translation)
Michael Palmer, Active Boundaries
Robin Blaser, Charms, Image Nations 5-14, Streams I, Syntax, and Pell Mell (all in The Holy Forest)
Robert Duncan, Roots and Branches
Lyn Hejinian, Saga/Circus
William Faulkner, The Hamlet, The Town, The Mansion, Sanctuary, and, Absalom, Absalom!
Kent Johnson, Homage to the Last Avant-Garde and Epigrammititis
Kevin Killian, Action Kylie and Wow Wow Wow Wow
Michael Slosek, A Sequence for Cinematic History
James Elkins, Pictures and Tears and The Object Stares Back
Rod Smith, Deed
Benjamin Friedlander, A Knot is Not a Tangle
Laura Moxley, Often Capital
Lisa Jarnot, Night Scenes and The Iliad Book XXII
The Grand Piano, vols. 4-7 (collective autobiography)
Chimed in Freddie (unattributed chapbook)
Robert Gluck, Reader
Graham Foust, Necessary Stranger
Susan Howe, Souls of the Labadie Tract
Eula Biss, The Balloonists
Alan Davies, Book 6
Rainer Werner Fassbinder, The Anarchy of the Imagination
Charles Olson, The Distances*
Chuck Stebelton, Flags and Banners
Virgil, Eclogues and Georgics

[note: * indicates "not for the first time"]

Saturday, November 29, 2008

Lyn Hejinian's "The Distance"

Philosophy can be seen as the history of struggles over the definitions of certain words: not just "knowledge," "being," "value," "right," but more crucially "think," "I," "thing," "eye," and just as crucially "with," "in," "as," "from." And "music," "human," "some." Lyn Hejinian's "The Distance" (the second of two long pieces in her new book, Saga/Circus) adds the rarely-considered emotions and passions, regret, pathos, cowardice, enthusiasm, forgetfulness, understanding, shock, love. This addition isn't her major philosophical innovation. That comes with the ways in which she sets every idea, feeling, variety of situatedness into motion. Everything is deployed, and what a concept is can no longer be a question of definition, but must instead be seen in the way it moves, happens, acts, its form of concretion in situated time. There's no general description of its motion; it's always what it is as a particular event, an event being a context thought of not as a "place" but as the whole structure of an occurrence (we are at sea, on a groundless ground).

I haven't mentioned that "The Distance" is the name of a ship, and that the poem takes place as an ocean voyage, without stated purpose or any end in sight.

We are passing through cascades of animation
And even that which is 'merely imaginary'
And that which is overlooked
Soak us.

(138)

on the other hand,

We are surrounded by immobilized projections.
(139)

There is the water, and there are icebergs and islands, frozen water and land at which it laps.

The emotions and concepts, so evanescent in themselves that they can barely be spoken of, let alone examined via direct observation, are deployed in "The Distance" via methods that are truer than definition and more radical than metaphor. Feelings and inclinations are bluntly personified, so that Pathos and Regret as animals simply do things, behaving in ways that aren't any less complex than real-life behavior, and therefore not reducible to allegories for the emotions that gave them names. Emotions are externalized through characters (Madoud, Feliz, Miroire, etc.) who don't embody them, but rather pass through them from varying directions. Or concepts are depolyed in propositions, but those propositions run into figures (the horizon, the wake, the dip and swell of the water beneath the boat, the sunrise, auditory and visual illusions) which take over the definitional aspect of the propositions and replace it (so that the push-forward and pull-back of a particular aquatic turbulence becomes the essential description of ambivalence--and not as a metaphor in the usual sense: ambivalence is, for the moment, nothing but that dynamic, and the water is still the water, not merely an object of comparison).

All these deployments and attempts at definition happen in and as context, and so they're transient and provisional. Once, however, a provisional statement has been made, it will always have been made--so that the essence of a concept or emotion is found in the aggregate of its provisional manifestations, in the dialectic between provisionality and always-having-been.

This is the kind of thinking that even the most far-out philosophical writing can't quite enact (Deleuze, writing brilliantly about thought in terms of speed and dynamics, coining slippery terms that are only defined by their contextualization throughout a text, still falls on the side of the propositional, and so his concepts always risk freezing into thingliness)--but art can.

Life can't be studied
As if it were the nonlife of something
Lived by someone studying.

(141)

The sentences are beautiful.

...I pass the camera
To others so as to emancipate the point of view. Trade is relevant
Everywhere. We can't escape economy, economies.
As far as we can see the world
Is unsparing of things to see, reality
Is profligate, ubiquitous, vivid, prolix, it's all too much, vista
Without terrain, the "too much," the "neither given nor giveable"
World we can neither approach nor leave. We live
Then through. Then having lived, we will always have
Lived. The only immortality is absence.

(118)

Where the colors driven by the wind
Apply, history returns, and so can I, having told myself these things
And keeping them in readiness to tell again.

(120)

...I remember
Patches of my own adolescence as I catch glimpses
Of patches of turbulence the wind is picking up, tearing
At the surface of the sea
But in those days my imagination drew thick forests
Into which I would dash
Into a secret future
Between trees, walking the forest floor on the outer edges of my feet--
Silent, invisible, in an infinite process of disappearing.
(112-113)

Pursuing a vibration that we take for a grebe
(131)

I want to understand
What I have seen and understand
That nothing I have seen explains what I have seen.

(131)

I can tell you
Everything we know about rats but I can't tell you what rats know
About themselves.

(135)

The thinking here works in distances and at limits. Thoughts, words, things and unthingly phenomena call out to one another across them, need one another.

...The northern waters are black as ink,
The southern waters are pale in contrast--but the contrast itself is nowhere
To be found.

(146)

I know these words.
My thoughts are dead without them.

(126)

...I feel all that I feel but there's nothing
There, nothing
Could be there: an emotion is held
In an absence together only
With the strength of an interior--anterior--presence.
But happily the world has poles
And they draw things out
Just as night draws
Bats from barns...

(144)

The bats are encountered, though (in the next lines), at dawn. While most of Hejinian's recent work has been "night work," full of sleep and dreams, this is a day poem, full of waking, sunrise, the coming into visibility of things.

...There is nothing here
But exposure. Every wave, even as it curls over the light, produces exposure,
Every thought is crossed by its own frame of illimitable
Transient foam...
...The sun
Is always prejudiced in favor of appearances--change, eventfulness
And destination.

(142)

A journey with a beginning and no end. Saga flowing into the beginning of history. Exposure of prison, war. Music, the interdependence of what it does and doesn't say, bringing the latter to light.

I'm again struck by the positivity of Hejinian's thought as a writer, her light courage to do and think, to help inquisitive enthusiasm carry itself out. It makes possible a 37-section take on the "life is a journey" figure that gives that figure more life than it may have ever had.

So much of her recent work is concerned with the border, distance, limit as productive, as the source of possibility--of splits and rifts as the production of more individuals, and thus more relationships, crossings, contexts. In "The Distance" there's always the split between past and future, thought and word, feeling and object, body and soul, visible and invisible. The voyage is in and across these distances, giving life to what waits on either side.


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Wednesday, November 05, 2008

The sense that this moment is unquestionably historic, and that, even more crucially, it's a chance to make it have been historic in a more profound and wide-ranging way.

On the south side of Madison, driving people to the polls: "Riiide to vote in style! We gotta juggler and a luxurious van! Free riiiides to the polls!" up and down the streets, kids chasing the car shouting "Obama! Obama!," Clay teaching three-ball techniques to the folks in the back seat, thumbs up and cheers from people in yards in the poorest part of town.

Back to the office after the polls closed, just in time to hear that Ohio had been called for Obama, thinking of my "Sing Out the Vote" cohorts.

The speech, like the campaign, made me want to be sincere, optimistic, tireless. The temporal and geographic expansiveness of it, the sense that it's not over for the human race, the plea for intelligence, its undeniable presence, had me in tears. The thought of everyone I know for whom the civil rights movement was the defining event of their lives, all the speeds and forms of social change, the thought that there were almost no bad reasons to feel bowled over by this.

I don't need to point out the reasons for caution, skepticism, not letting him get away with things, the need for the degree and intensity of involvement he asks for. My sustaining reason for optimism is the suspicion (based partly on my sister's reports of Obama while she was working for the Illinois Democratic Sentate) that he's actually prepared to listen, if we have something to say.

What in the hell is wrong with people in California? GLBT rights is an issue we're definitely going to have to press during the presidency of a thoughtful and articulate man who can still parrot the inane sentence "I believe a marriage is between a man and a woman," as if belief meant anything. (Admittedly, he tentatively opposed Prop 8).

Right now, though, I can't help feeling thrilled, even in exhaustion, at the prospect of a shift from eight years of a national political culture based on fear as the ultimate motivation to one in which desire and possibility are at least claimed as guiding ideals. To see photos from around the world of people's joy makes me think, again and again, that I want to love this country.

Saturday, November 01, 2008

I've got poems in the new Turntable and Blue Light.


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Farewell to Studs Terkel.



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Get out the vote
!



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Cannot Exist no.4 seeks cover art--and submissions are still open for poetry until November 7th.

Monday, October 27, 2008



I just got back from performing with a large and amazing gang of musicians on the Sing Out the Vote Ohio tour, organized in only a few weeks by Holly Near, with help from many women and a couple of men working on voter registration, Obama campaigning, and other urgent projects. What an incredible experience. For one thing, Holly is amazing--an inspiring performer, organizer and person who in almost any concert or conversation is likely to say something I want to write down and think about for a long time. For another thing, the sense of being part of a group of artists who are contributing collectively to social change is satisfying and educational in ways I hadn't even expected. As Holly points out, this kind of music (really a lot of kinds--the variety was huge) isn't a retro thing, a '60s thing. It's a set of ongoing variations on interlocking traditions that are much older than that, and will go on for a long time, represented here by a diverse group of people (none of them trying to hog a spotlight, all energetically doing whatever needed to be done and consulting with one another to improve the performances) that would never have appeared together on stage before the labor movement, civil rights, feminism, gay liberation and the consciousness of links across age and class boundaries.

And the apparent success of the project is impressive. The concerts and street singing re-energized organizers and volunteers. They brought their friends and got them to sign up. One big lesson for me: we sang on the green at Ohio State University in Columbus, by a table where organizers were attempting to recruit Get Out the Vote volunteers and convince students to hop on the vans (running every half-hour) taking people to vote early. As often happens on college campuses, it seemed like no-one was paying any attention, that we were probably wasting our energy. After singing in a handful of classes, we ran into one of the organizers from the table, who told us that, while we were performing, she got ten times as many volunteers as she's usually able to get in a day. I'm going to remind myself of that experience often, whenever I feel like the art I'm involved in is being flung out into a void. The work we do as artists (singers, actors, poets, painters, dancers, composers) plays crucial roles in imagining and moving towards the kinds of societies we want to live in, and the effects we can't see might not even be something we have to hope future generations will experience--they might be immediate and only temporarily invisible.

The work continues after the election, and I think there's reason for optimism. If Obama's elected (and, holy shit, I hope he is) things are, at worst, going to get a lot more interesting.

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Links:

Photos from the Columbus concert
YouTube videos of anthemic election songs

Thursday, September 18, 2008

Cannot Exist no.3 is out. It's really good, such a variety of intensities that I find it difficult to read.

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The Nonsense Company will soon be part of a very unusual production of King Lear. Five groups, five desserts.

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"Pardon me while my intraproprioceptive wife has a breakdown."

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What I'm reading (listed to work off a bit of caffeine energy before rehearsal):

Kevin Davies, The Golden Age of Paraphenalia
Marcel Proust, Sodom and Gomorrah
T.J. Clark, The Sight of Death
Maurice Merleau-Ponty, Phenomenology of Perception
Cannot Exist no.3
submissions for no.4
Robin Blaser, The Holy Forest
Michael Palmer, Active Boundaries
Cesar Vallejo, The Collected Poems
Eduardo Galleano, Genesis
Alain de Botton, The Architecture of Happiness
Ron Silliman, The Alphabet (Rick's copy arrived today, and I expect mine tomorrow, but can't wait. Whoo-ee!)

... and about fifty other things. There are the books I read at least every other day.
Lists are fun.

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The kind of access that comes with the internet makes me so very aware of mortality.

Saturday, September 06, 2008

a few further post-RNC reflections, facts, fragments

Sarah Palin is dangerous. This strategy has worked before: take an ignorant, inexperienced, smug and nasty psychopath and run them for office on the platform of ordinariness. She's Bush, with more rhetorical skill.


The left should have a massive series of theater workshops.


a securitization of major
preemptive raids of alleged



Dakota occupation of Coldwater Spring site near Minnehaha Park expected to end peacefully today... to reclaim the site for their tribe... but federal officials disrupted the plan from the start, granting a permit for the occupation, even though protesters hadn't requested one.

(Compare to the march-blocking strategy on Thursday)



In full riot gear, jokingly
refer to themselves as "turtles"

More arrests (818) than
at any convention except
NYCs in 2004 (1781)
(Chicago's '68 DNC had 589)
19 felony charges, 30 journalists

Cmdr Steve Frazer, head
of one mobile division, called
the parade route's end "Ground
Zero," called thrown shit
and piss "bio attacks"

mobile force field units
officers moving about "subtly"
"in soccer-mom minivans"

former Mpls police chief:
St. Paul could've handled security
with a few hundred extras. Instead,
an orgy of overtime
subsidized by the federal government
via the National Security Act


(much of this from the Star-Tribune, whose reporting has become worse, writing as if the police were constantly reigning in crowds of people bent on chaos and destruction, whereas they generally were blocking the progress of peaceful marches moving down clearly defined routes. These people weren't "keeping the situation under control"--we were.

The paper, however, is still emphasizing the gap between the language of counter-terrorism and the reality of the protests--a degree of nuance lacking in the "nonpartisan" CityPages, the Minneapolis paper that, like many free weeklies, features a broadly cynical tone, attempting to sound hip in the apparent absence of any work to actually find out what's going on. The latest issue describes the anarchist march on the 1st as "a cross between a disco and Hamas," and the writer doesn't seem to have taken the ten minutes required to find out that that march left an hour earlier than the official parade because the anarchists decided well beforehand to separate, spatially or temporally, their actions from those officially permitted.

But I'm getting away from the main point: the detached, "with-it" cool of the weeklies, uninvolved and uninvested, is worse than the police repression of the protesters. This is the attitude that renders anything it touches (which include the whole surface field of culture) unimportant, an object of easy mockery, a series of empty appearances for the entertainment of all. That's it--for the free weeklies, everything is "entertainment," presented by people who relish their power to dismiss. The invulnerability of such an attitude combines with a lack of real inquiry to produce a form of "news" much more conducive to totalitarian culture than any of the more obviously ideologically invested forms of journalism.)



The most important issues--they're not "issues"--are still poverty and imperialism, the techniques (they're not just "techniques") used to maintain them and their destruction of the basis for any acceptable form of human social existence.

Friday, September 05, 2008

YESTERDAY:

We go to the student walkout and march. Mostly high-schoolers, enthusiastic and charming. It's still early in the day, cool and misty. Ska with very bad lyrics, to be reperformed tonight at the high-profile, basically pointless Nader rally. Songs that say "We say." Careerism in leftist culture. When syntax runs into corners, the voice of the collective of non-individuals speaks in readily available phrases. Then he remembers counter-recruitment, of vital importance. Pronounces "Clean Water" as "Clean War Act." "The more out of tune, the better," claims Shannon from Riot Folk. "The Christian icon is not stars and stripes, but a slaughtered lamb." Joe Hill as odd but good soundtrack for transgender Make-In. This ragtag bunch is the group that should be listened to by older activists and moralizing liberals. This song is about accepting your own criminality. "If the fetus you save turns out to be gay, will you still fight for its rights?" A handful of actual Republican delegates for peace (who then say stupid things about immigration). "This is what a jumble of thoughts & observations looks like!" Ensure safety by having everyone repeat, "I have an announcement. Cheney, Big Oil Bob, and General Betrayus are goint to try to escape arrest by boarding a boat at the Harriet Island Yacht Club. We're going to camp out here on the hay for about half an hour, then march down to the park to surprise them. While we're here, we'll eat some kick-ass food provided by Seeds of Peace--but we're going to stay out of the middle of the street, because the police... uh, there's no diplomatic way I can say this... you know." The last part, repeated en masse, is particularly funny, and the whole idea has a theatrical sense far superior to that I associate with the usual things we're asked to repeat as groups. Rick and I walk down to the island a half-hour before the students get there. The three arrestees, well-made big puppet heads on smaller bodies, are there, with little to do, so while Tao Rodriguez-Seeger sings "Guantanamera" Dick Cheney holds a mic and gently boogies, as if performing the song in a hotel lounge. It's hilarious; all movement songs should include some such odd juxtaposition. Then the puppets are placed on trial.

We find the bigger march stalled on a bridge just a block from the Capitol, flanked on two sides by battalions of riot cops on horses, bikes, trucks, standing with batons, bulldozers behind them. Apparently the well-advertised 4 p.m. march was only given a permit that lasted until 5--an idiotic idea, the police only asking for trouble. It's obvious to me that the best way to keep the situation "under control" would've been to let the march proceed to the Xcel Center without harrassment. Instead, the cops pepper-sprayed the crowd at the Captiol before the permit was even up, ordering them to disperse. They've already been on this bridge to downtown for at least an hour by the time we arrive, folks on bikes endlessly circling in the middle of an intersection, a moving wall between the cops on its east side and the many hundreds of people still on the bridge to the north. We run into Roy Zimmerman as we walk up, and the three of us explore and join the crowd for a while. A nice example of solidarity: a woman on the bridge has to pee, so friends form a dense circle with their backs to her on the grassy median. As the three of us start to leave for the evening's performance at the Bedlam, the cops rush the crowd, trying to get them off the bridge, routing them back toward the Capitol. Instead, the crowd suddenly turns on the Captiol lawn and rushes to the next street over, trying to get across that bridge. The cops block them off again. This could go on for a long time (and, I find out later, does, with another 200 or so arrests).

The performance goes well, the Myshkins and Roy with the WYXY News Team followed by another performance of Wallace Shawn's The Fever, even better than Tuesday's, leaving me thoroughly exhausted. But there's more to do. We swap songs with David Rovics and Jim Page for a couple of hours. I've never met Jim before; he's a great performer and songwriter, a lovely person onstage and off. As with Bryan's performance of Shawn's play, Jim starts off very softly, only gradually arriving at a moment of normal audibility, charged with intense attention, everything that happens in it opened up. He gives a great intro to a song about the 1999 WTO protests, in which he says "People tend to feel morally superior to those young folks who break windows and such. What did those windows ever do to them? Well, I've lived in Seattle for 27 years, and I know what was there before those windows were: low-income housing. When that housing was knocked down for Planet Hollywood and Nike Town, people who'd lived there for ten years had nowhere to go, and had to turn to government aid. Now, the first symptoms of being forced out of a place you've lived for ten years are migraines and dental problems. Those are the first symptoms. A lot of people die within five or six years. So I don't think those windows are innocent." He made a similar point about the Caterpillar tractors used to knock down houses in Palestine. They're not built for road construction; the company knows exactly what they're for. I'd like to write a poem of objects, seen as resonating not only with their history, but with the histories they're intended to create.

Today is Ryan's birthday, so we're going out on the town before our penultimate 10 p.m. performance as the Nonsense Company.

Wednesday, September 03, 2008

Yesterday, more reports of raids by the cops, arrests for blocking streets and rushing police officers, but also for simply moving too slowly. Someone apparently threw a rock through the window of a bus full of Republican delegates from Connecticut. Not sure how I feel about that. The papers here, so far, have been pretty good about maintaining the distinctions between the anarchist "elements" and the protesters engaging in permitted activities. The anarchists themselves are trying to promote this distinction--basically, everyone's doing a better job of it than the police.

The "March for Our Lives" took place yesterday, organized by the Poor People's Coalition for Economic Human Rights. The rally, like Monday's, boasted a wide ethnic diversity and age range, reflecting the sense that poverty is THE most important issue--that economic injustice is the umbrella under which the most social problems can be gathered. There was some troubling rhetorical conflict between the organizers and the anarchists: at one point in the rally, a bunch of people suddenly ran off to (I think) block one of the intersections next to the park. The main organizer urged everyone to stay focused on the stage--which I decided to do; I felt like the event, with its focused topic, deserved a concentration that would promote its theatrical presence. At the same time, the organizer's continued chiding rubbed me the wrong way. She accused the anarchist rush of being "a deliberately orchestrated distraction" from the attempt by poor people to make their voices heard. This seems like paranoia to me. There can be a debate over tactics, but the anarchists aren't obligated to stand there and listen to the speakers, and they've also decided not to criticize the techniques of pacifists. As often happens, the anger and condescension directed at anarchists made the organizers look bad. On the other hand, the point of another speaker--that the working class in the Twin Cities already sees violence and property destruction on a daily basis, and that a multiracial, pacifist action would be more of a shock to the police who assume a tendency toward violence on the part of people of color--made a lot of sense. It threw the techniques of the anarchists into the light of a question, rather than a moral condemnation. It's a question that seems entirely appropriate for anarchism: is a given action responding in the right way to the immediate specificity of a context?

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It seems like, earlier in the day, the astonishing mob of police in riot gear have usually been pretty calm. It's as the afternoon goes on that they start splitting peaceful marches arbitrarily into smaller sections, detaining large groups of people for hours on single city blocks, raiding various spaces. Last night there were three attempted police actions at the Bedlam Theatre, where I'm performing every night--the first a response to an anonymous call asserting that the Bedlam was selling "more than beer and wine." Fortunately, the folks there run a very tight ship, ID'ing people rigorously, etc., so the officer who showed up was shown around the building to her satisfaction. When told that the theater was hosting evenings of political art in response to the RNC, she said "I'll try to come back for that. I'd be protesting if I didn't have this job." Later in the evening, a fleet of bicycle cops showed up, and an hour later seven or eight squad cars; neither found anything illegal going on, so they left. The sort of luck not found by the people at the RNC Welcoming Committee Convergence Center, who had their dangerous pamphlets and unspecified "weapons" confiscated.

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At the Bedlam last night (after music by the Prince Myshkins David Rovics and Jim Page, and mock news by the WYXY News Team), Bryan Bevell gave a magnificent performance of Wallace Shawn's monologue The Fever. Bryan's acting was subdued, quiet, even with the gradually increasing noise from the bar outside the theater, and this mode of performance got the audience into a state of intense concentration. It's a fantastic piece, done here with admirable vulnerability. He'll do it again on Thursday. Tonight, more of the Myshkins with guests, WYXY, and the Nonsense Company performing "Great Hymn of Thanksgiving / Conversation Storm."

http://www.bedlamtheatre.org


all-too-hurriedly-typed,

Andy

Tuesday, September 02, 2008

more from the twin cities

YESTERDAY:

We joined the silent march of Vets for Peace and an anti-torture group, in which we dressed as Guantanamo prisoners, in orange jumpsuits and hoods. Participating in a march with an actual dramatic idea behind it was pretty satisfying (though I still felt grouchy about the left's inadequate ability to perform--we could have been absolutely silent, and maintained militaristically straight rows and columns).

At the end, I saw the back of a t-shirt that gave me yet another reading of the opening sentence of Ron Silliman's Tjanting: "Not THIS!", it read, under a picture of a football player, down on one knee with a ball and one finger pointing triumphantly into the air. The front turned out to be a photo of two collaborating baseball players, with the caption "We need more of this..." and the logo for the Revolutionary Communist Party--all of which, the socialist politics and the privileging of baseball, made the connection with Ron seem even stronger.

(Reiko points out the important mistake in my reading of the shirt's front in the comments box. Check it out.)


TODAY:

The big march on the RNC. Already hotter today than under a hood yesterday. Undocumented immigrant among the first casualties of the Iraq war. Emma's Revolution turns out to be performing at the opening rally, and we get to chat with them awhile. "Whoever it is in power, and whoever you are, they've got a plan for you." Toothed blasts rip through the sound system; they clearly don't know which channel is which. A huge number of Ethiopians demonstrating. This constant motion of many of us, restless inquisitive citizenry, mobile polis. Riot police surround, at various unpermitted intersections, the anarchists who've set off well before the official march, who dance their asses off, ebullient music pouring clear from rolling speakers, not "doing their thing" but revelling in their mutual presence and possibility, a height of joy and thoughtful, thorough organization for which they hardly ever get credit (how I've missed them during the Bush administration, in which they seemed almost invisible). They dance again in a fenced-in alley near the energy center, in front of a troupe of pro-war protesters; the encounter is non-confrontational and hilarious, the cops (I think) afraid to advance into this block with their gas masks and rifles, not wanting to appear over-reactive in the face of such committed, energetic, subversive yet non-threatening activity.

The main march is gigantic--every time it seems we've come to its end (moving backwards along the route toward the car, which we'll take to our tech rehearsal at the Bedlam Theatre) another dense three blocks' worth of people comes into view. Billionairesses in elaborate, buxom costume sing "Oh, show us the way/to the next little war..." Later in the day, of course, the reports start to come in of a dumpster set aflame and pushed into a cop car, of people arrested for moving too slowly down the street, of the main march split into sections, hundreds of people delayed for half an hour at a time, some still not permitted to leave a city block hours later.

At the end of a night at the Bedlam Theatre that includes us (as the Prince Myshkins and the Nonsense Company), Roy Zimmerman, David Rovics, and the WYXY News Show, the punk/folk band Blackbird Raum plays and utterly blows my mind. They're all fine musicians, well-rehearsed--but it's the washboard player who floors me most thoroughly, outdoing the accordion, banjo, washtub bass, musical saw and mandolin, playing ridiculous fills, constantly varying rhythms at blinding tempi. All this unamplified, saturated with friendship between the band members. A young woman with a sprig of fern in her hair dances with another woman, and their closeness is the perfect beautiful compliment, until I forget about them completely in the thrill of the songs. They kept me energetic, as exhausted as I am from marching, tech-ing, organizing... but now, sleep, with no reason to get up before 11.

Sunday, August 31, 2008

I'm in the Twin Cities, for a series of performances (see the previous post) occasioned by the RNC. The city is quiet for the moment, though I'm on the Minneapolis side of the river. You can hear the cicadas, but not the cops bursting into the RNC Welcoming Committee Convergence space late at night to confiscate dangerous pamphlets, laptops, cameras, and activist bodies. Which already happened a few days ago--but since the space has since re-opened, I'd be surprised if more raids weren't in the works.

Tomorrow will be hot, especially in a black hood and orange jumpsuit, in which we'll march with the War Resister's League in a demonstration against torture and extraordinary rendition.

This is my first real "political blog moment": is anyone else utterly dumbfounded that the media is reporting McCain's choice of vice presidential candidate as "confusing?" Is there anyone who's been following things to whom the opportunism of this act (the attempt to give the guy "diversity credibility" and to appeal to the--small, I hope--group of female Clinton supporters who are so bitter about Obama that they'd actually vote for a sexist maniac) is anything but utterly transparent and comprehensible? In a performance tonight, my friend Courtney McClean told us how tired she was of being angry about war, hatred, etc. I realized that I'm actually not angry about those things--my feelings about them are strong and very different from anger--and that what raises my ire is the knee-jerk circulation of phraseology through public discourse--the way people just accept phrases, sentences, descriptions, frames as they're thrown at them--and so, even when that language is treated from ideologically opposed points of view, the terms are already more powerful than anything their speakers might actually want to say.

Announcements

Three things, the preparation for which has been eating up every spare minute of my time:

September 1-6
RADICAL NEIGHBORLY CONVIVIALITY:

A week of performance and community building in response to the other RNC
Curated by Bedlam Theatre and the Nonsense Company
featuring The Nonsense Company, the Prince Myshkins, Roy Zimmerman, Bedlam Theatre, Bryan Bevell (performing Wallace Shawn's "The Fever"), David Rovics and more.
Bedlam Theatre, 1501 S. 6th St., Minneapolis (West Bank)
http://www.bedlamtheatre.org
http://www.nonsensecompany.com

(The Nonsense Company will also do two additonal performances on Friday and Saturday)


September 25-28, 8 p.m.
KING LEAR

Puppet Uprising's 2nd Annual Secret Shakespearean Dessert Theater

Five groups from around the country each take an act of Shakespeare's play, each in a different space and with a different dessert item served. The Nonsense Company's treatment of Act III is going to be pretty strange, and I imagine that we're not the only group of whom that can be said.

http://puppetuprising.org/upcoming.html


(Next Week)
CANNOT EXIST no.3

edited by Andy Gricevich
featuring Alex Burford, Mark Cunningham, Carrie Etter, Lawrence Giffin, William Gillespie, Kevin Killian, Mark Lamoureux, Bonnie Jean Michalski, Sheila E. Murphy, Andy Nicholson and Dirk Stratton.
http://cannotexist.blogspot.com

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Thursday, August 14, 2008

I got my copy of Active Boundaries, Michael Palmer's book of selected essays and talks, in the mail yesterday. Looks like it's going to be a good read. And that I'll probably feel the urge to go back and reread everything he's written.

Here are a few quotations from his talk, "Counter-Poetics and Current Practice:"

"In a poem you can be perfectly in a logic where a thing is both A and not-A [...]. This is not simply frivolity--it's the announcement of another area of knowing. [...] This is a poem that is not simply there to reinscribe something already experienced, but is actually a mode of experience in and of itself. [...] What are the interrelations? It's always a question. Who are we in relation? Who am I? Am I doing the speaking? Are you doing the listening? [...] A refusal, also of the reader as a passive consumer. Speaking to a passive audience is much more a HItlerian form of discourse where the passivity of the audience is assumed, where they are not involved in an active exchange of meaning. [...] the poem only occurs, is only there, in the event of the poem, which is in its engagement with the reader. Except in some platonic sense, the poem is not present when the book is closed. What I mean is that the poem is an even, temporally and historically conditioned. And so I am interested in acts of composition that emphasize this without becoming simply buckets into which anyone can drop whatever they want. The poem is not simply an aleatory event." (245-47)

Ok, so this is all stuff I've thought about for some time--but Palmer says it with great elegance. "Another area of knowing." The poem as event and the whole way of thinking that moves in terms of events (as distinguished from, and enveloping in dialectical fashion, the "object/process" dichotomy). The distinction between a work's context always being part of its events--the determinateness of any given context--and the very different notion of the work as "meaning whatever you want it to mean."


In the course of discussing Jack Spicer, Palmer poses a critique of the Wright/Bly "Deep Image" school, claiming that those poets simply appropriated a kind of image, with a particular feel, from its original Spanish/Moorish cultures, and then dropped examples of it into their poems from the outside, assuming that they'd just serve as expressive devices there, without internal motivation.

"There's enough reference [in Spicer's "lemon" letter to Lorca] obliquely to that misappropriation that I suspect he had it in mind. So much of Spicer, and other poets, is directed against anything that could be taken as a constructive or creative device around which you could build a poetics. And in this respect one can see a Spicer as having a relationship of critical negativity to the culture as a whole, I suppose, but also to the models of poetic making that became so standard." (251)


"There is a certain arbitrairiness outside a given language system, so that the possibility of reference and signification rests on an agreement we make in community, and once community begins to disintegrate that agreement begins to break down." (253)

Again, not really a new idea--but somehow, in this context, it struck me in a big way. If the possibility of reference, of using language to talk about things, is a communal matter, then the question of how much of our language is being given to us, for instance, by corporations (including the news and the federal government in its current state, but also the language of advertising, the language text-messaging and various kinds of internet discourse allow for and encourage by virtue of their form), becomes really crucial. If a great deal of our language, from its most instrumental to its most fanciful uses, is being given to us not by our daily forms of practice, but by language networks in which we're enmeshed, but which are outside any of our fields of choice, then reference is truly in trouble. It's a real danger: that one will only be understood if one employs the terms that no speaker chooses, but simply inherits. Given that danger, what is poetry to do? There are, of course, a number of proposals floating around. Palmer sees poetry as a taking-back of the meanings of things by enacting the processes of making sense, rather than allowing them to be taken for granted. Dale Smith calls for poetry that helps enact new platforms of communication. Some Flarf treats imposed discourse ironically by appropriating and recycling it, trying for an implicit critique. Barrett Watten asserts that no-one can understand anyone else, and that poetry needs to place itself directly in that situation. Though each of these proposals raises its own concrete questions and has its own specific shortcomings, their generally problematic nature, the difficulty of making a convincing proposal at all, is one sign of just how serious a problem this is.


"In Jabes' case, if you do not allow for silence--silence being the place where you reply to the question, where you reply to the other--[...] then you are appropriating the discourse and entering, then, yourself, into an authoritarian mode. [...] He constructs exactly out of what is considered the nondiscursive, the spaces between things, the junctures, the breaks and fragments." (255)

I have to finally get around to Jabes one of these days. The drastic cover price of his books has slowed my approach so far.


[Here he's been talking about Latin American poets]:
"It's interesting to relate this to the problem of political poetry in the United States, which tends to become doctrinal or an occasion for self-display. You take, let's say, the poets' Nicaragua shuttle and go down for ten days,then you return and become a hero of the Revolution. For those who are interested, to come to the deeper responsibility of the political is every bit as demanding and difficult as coming to the deeper responsibility of the emotional. It's instructive to go to the poets for whom the political is not a 'topic'." (257)

It's that last sentence I want to highlight here. I'll be thinking about that for a while. I'll point out again, as extra food for that thought, Palmer's claim that "deep image" didn't work because it was taken from its place in a long-developing cultural context. So the thought of the political as "not a 'topic,'" as an assumed aspect of one's culture, can't, for a North American poet, just mean lifting ways of writing from Peru or Chile.


"[...] I was drawn to [Robert Creeley's] sense of staying away from one aspect of revision, which is the normative sense of revising to conform to certain expectations. And so, I turned to de Kooning, who in an interview talked about returning and returning to the first moment of the canvas, and the layering process, the process of accretion and the process of emergence. In other words, you return into the act of the thing until the thing is complete." (263)


There's plenty more there.

the fragmentation of subjectivity...

...doesn't amount to much if the many voices that say "I" are more or less identical.

They may also be identical in sharing an unreflected-upon, inarticulate comfort with their own contradictoriness--a fragmentation that precedes anything that might happen in the poem.

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One major problem: "self" or "subject" gets identified with "voice," and a multiplication or fragmentation of subjectivity becomes a matter of multiple voices.

I'd think this problem would have gone away by now, since more interesting solutions were already around by the late nineteenth century.

Friday, July 25, 2008

You can now download my reading with Carrie Etter from Tuesday's "Series A" in Chicago by clicking here. Some dirty words blanked out for radio.

Monday, July 21, 2008

reading in Chicago tomorrow

Tuesday, July 22nd

All the way from London: Carrie Etter

All the way from Madison: Andy Gricevich

Reading poems in Chicago
at
Series A

Friday, July 18, 2008

Watten's Grand Piano

I've revised my discomfort with Barrett Watten's stance as represented in the collectively-written memoir/essay The Grand Piano. I'd seen the attempt to present a unified front for Language Writing, in the form of a story about a singular avant-garde movement appearing dramatically on the scene, as exactly the wrong move, at a time when so many writers of my age (plus or minus a decade or so) use "LangPo" as a broad stylistic term, without historical specificity, in a generalized way that misses the then-and-still-staggering breadth and variety among and within the writing of its practitioners, absorbing their work into a sound-bite series of descriptions paraphrased from two or three essays written in the early 1980s.

In the light of his contributions to GP 5 & 6, as well as his recent note on the "1970s" conference in Orono, I've come to see Watten's critical project as an effort to retain a place for radical art (and its extensions into the larger culture through poetics, literary history and criticism) at the institutional table--to keep it from being displaced entirely by official criticism, which, even at its best, is almost always far behind art, both chronologically and philosophically. As regards "Language Poetry," this is a place that's barely been gained--a tenuousness that shows in the easy reduction to formulas mentioned above.

In GP 6, Watten revisits his first book of criticism, Total Syntax (a book I've found endlessly fascinating and influential, and which absolutely deserves a reprint). He focuses on that book's distinction between "technique" and "method." "Technique" is everything about how the work is constructed, while "method" is technique's extension in the form of engagements with the world outside the work, whether through its manner of reception, the forms of its presentation, or the range of materials about which it has something to say. Technique is "the beginning of a series that provisionally arrives with the work" (p. 76), while method is what comes "after," beyond its making.

At the end of his section of #6, Watten cites Progress and Total Syntax as the "sites" he's left, places to be returned to. That the latter is included puts the "split" in his career in a new light for me. Before the split (which might be marked by Bad History), there's a concentration on the production of new work, corresponding to "technique--" the period in which he was writing poetry. After it, there's the period characterized by The Constructivist Moment (his second critical collection), as well as most of the writing on his blog. This phase addresses, in one way, the matter of method. (The use of these terms in this way cheapens them a bit, since Watten's been concerned with both all along. I'll return to them in their richer and more provocative implications in the next post).

The picture that emerges now for me is of a poet and critic whose commited and unapologetic thinking has pushed into often counterintuitive areas in which the result can't be entirely predicted. The fact that I find The Constructivist Moment less compelling, less radical than Total Syntax has as much to do with the fact that the more recent work is addressed to an institutional context in which I'm not currently involved (or particularly interested) as it has to do with the quality of that work. It's an attempt to make frames for the reception of poetry that depend on something more vital than the mere economics of publication and distribution, to expand it into the extra-poetic. I remain skeptical of most academic discourse and worried about ways in which this effort might backfire, producing a strong but undesirable reception for the art in whose name it's made--but that institutional address is a job that needs to be done in some way, and I'm glad that he's doing it.

And he does qualify the "we," in a substantial footnote, claiming that it's to be used as a "shifter" rather than a "rigid designator"--that each writer undertook different investigations in his or her own way, around some shared concerns and a number of different ones, and that these individual works were encouraged by the group dynamic. That's a distinction from the "unified front" picture, and sounds pretty damn good to me.

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I've also just reread Watten's first two collections, Opera/Works and Decay, the former for the second time and the latter for the umpteenth. I'm still blown away by their singularity, their strangeness that hasn't faded a bit, their breadth and humor and unique form of rigor. In a recent post-reading conversation somebody claimed that Language Poetry is about "the process of the experiment" to the exclusion of the poem. When I disagreed, he said something like "nobody remembers specific lines from a Charles Bernstein poem, or a Barrett Watten poem." I realized just how wrong that is; sentences from Silliman's Tjanting, language from Bernstein's Controlling Interests, lines from Armantrout's and Perelman's work, and most definitely from Watten's Decay, Complete Thought, Conduit and others have stuck with me for a long time, still signalling what's possible.

The aggressive energy with which so many writers compulsively argue that this writing is a thing of the past, an "experiment" that long ago ran its course, indicates all on its own just how far the work is from having been absorbed.

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Tuesday, June 24, 2008

While on tour in California a couple of months back, I read Juliana Spahr's The Transformation, certainly one of the best novels (if it's a novel) published in my lifetime, and the best investigation I've seen of the questions and contradictions that thoughtful North Americans (and, in particular, politically concerned artists) tend to run into in the 21st century.

Spahr's novel is intelligent, moving, crucial, tentative in all the best ways while remaining emphatic in its ethical commitment. It's the story of the change in her writing that led to her wartime poetry collection, This Connection of Everyone with Lungs. Told almost entirely in the third person plural, it's the story of a three-person relationship that moves to Hawaii in the late '90s. There "they" meet with a series of contradictions and absent places: their roles as low-grade pawns in the post-grad employment machine, which is at the same time a vast system reproducing cultural imperialism in a colonized place; the ecology, alien to them but also invasive as regards the island; the lack of social support for the kind of sexual relationship they've undertaken; the foregrounding of the impossibility of ranking issues of class, race, gender, and aesthetic commitments. It's the story of their subsequent move to another colonized set of islands (New York), and the effects of 9/11 and the beginning of the "War on Terror" on every aspect of their lives. Most of all, it's a story about discovering vulnerabilities, at first imposed upon the "they" of the book, and finally sought after in the consciousness that only the opening of themselves to all these contradictions, difficulties and dangers can make possible a life and a writing that could, in the midst of social, cultural, economic and political crisis, point toward more desirable forms of human existence.

I'm thankful for this courageous cultivation of vulnerability, this openness to one's possible and even inevitable wrongness that nonetheless refuses resignation, choosing instead to see ethical contradiction and error as the mask shown by possible alternatives in a historical period that blocks their real appearance.

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Wednesday, June 18, 2008

Invasive Species

like duplexes

Thursday, June 12, 2008

Uninflectedness and Irony

Two ubiquitous modes in contemporary art (both often present): uninflectedness and irony.

Uninflectedness:
All surfaces are smooth and even. There's no real disruption; any dissonance is absorbed into the total effect. No abrupt shifts.

Irony:
The message is "I'm not really (doing) this," though the cue that lets us in on this message might be so slight as to be absent (the artist merely seems to have assumed, "no-one could possibly think I mean this").

In neither case is there an invitation to risk or care, a self-exceeding involvement with the materials of the work and the world as seen from the work. Each mode negates the traditional relations of the artwork to subjectivity, rejecting the investments of the artist and the viewer. Uninflectedness does this by simply refusing any stance toward anything--a "hands-off" approach--while irony violently destroys such investments by inhabiting positions it characterizes as false in the very act of inhabiting them.

These are rejections of an approach to art that depends on a unified subject as the locus of meaning, and in many cases they particularly work as avoidances of the most common forms of sincerity, with the sentimentality or self-aggrandizement sincerity can involve. In this sense uninflectedness and irony could be progressive, if only they didn't so often seem to be mere negations of what they oppose. If sincerity in its most commodified forms is offensive because it actually turns out to be poisonous to care, a real, comprehensive critique of it would involve the discovery of ways to invite care that stem from entirely different foundations, that show (rather than--as with bad sincerity--tell or insist on) what's lost in the decay of the communication of commitment into an aesthetic ideology of emotional habit.


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Note:
I've been thinking about the problems of irony for a long time. The notion of "uninflectedness" came to mind while I was trying to answer the question: "Why does so much contemporary pop music, though obviously skilled and intelligent, leave me so cold?" I was particularly trying to figure out what bothered me about the music of Sufjan Stevens, which I've just started listening to and like quite a lot. Stevens has an incredibly even vocal delivery, all within a very restricted dynamic range, and his lyrics are poetically interesting, and generally describable as "almost actually being about something." The arrangements are texturally and melodically thoughtful. I want more dynamic shifts, more harmonic dissonance. The recording (of Come on, feel the Illinoise!), like most pristine contemporary digital recordings, is very compressed, so the dynamic range not only of the performance style but of the music in its entirety is squashed down to a highly listenable smoothness. The technology that makes it possible to produce these scintillating arrangements encourages--and all but demands--an uninflected music (it's a lot harder to go from soft to loud singing in a close-miked digital recording than in a rougher analog situation). These are songs that could be breathtaking, but instead they're just very good.

Admittedly, Stevens takes this vocal uninflectedness and uses it in productive ways. The melodies he and his backing vocalists sing end up being treated like more string and horn parts, breaking syllables where the melody, rather than the language, dictates, and this makes the singing a fully integrated "instrumental section" in his polyphonic arrangements. In this respect he's an exception among recent songwriters I've heard, for whom uninflectedness merely sounds like a form of expression (perhaps one characteristic of a generation raised on ADD drugs).

Irony is all over contemporary songwriting, especially in the adoption of musical genres that were initially performed sincerely, but are now viewed as kitsch.

In recent poetry, "Conceptual Writing" might be characterized by uninflectedness, in its utterly impersonal approach to the texts it appropriates and processes (at least in the descriptions of CW given by Kenneth Goldsmith). Flarf, on the other hand (at least in its "classic," "cloyingly awful" period), tends toward the ironic. Both tendencies can make something out of what's primarily a merely negative tendency (the way Language writing has generated new constructive principles out of its initial negations of subjective expressivity, narrative, etc.), and both always run the risk of becoming willing constructions of the technologies that make them possible.

Aesthetic innovation via the negation of other modes involves the discovery of new problems. The work is one of engaging with those as problems, rather than just sitting in the glow of the new until what's new in art turns out to look just like what was already around outside it.

Friday, June 06, 2008

Cannot Exist no.2 is out...

...and chock full of good writing, as well as some stuff by me. Click the title of the post to get it.

Sunday, May 25, 2008


Goodbye, Utah, and thanks, with love.

Thursday, May 22, 2008

A bit ago, I had poems published in Bob Heman's magazine of very short poems, CLWN WR. The earlier issues Bob sent me contain some truly magnificent stuff (as does the one I'm in). Not easy to get, but well worth your while if you can find it.

I've also got new stuff in the latest Moria, which is easy to find. It's a fine, fine online magazine.
If the first line begins with a lowercase letter, it gives the title (assuming there is a title) the opportunity to link up with the first line, which can be extremely interesting (if not exactly a rarity in the writing I read & write) when there are possibilities for multiple syntaxes, so that the title & opening line can be equally read as independent or conjoined.


Tips of branches of the maple in the front yard, which a few weeks ago pointed into the air three feet above my head, are now so weighted with great green leaves and pods (these someday to whirl and spin in their fall) that they end below my waist.

And junebugs are here, banging against the door, though it isn't June.


I have recently read:

Bob Perelman, Primer and To the Reader (both for the second or third time)
Juliana Spahr, The Transformation
Benjamin Friedlander, A Knot is Not a Tangle
Graham Foust, Necessary Stranger
William Faulkner, The Hamlet, The Town, The Mansion
Eileen Myles, Sorry, Tree

all of which I adored--or found therein much to take the breath away.

Thursday, April 17, 2008

Lyn Hejinian gave an absolutely breathtaking reading at Woodland Pattern last Sunday.

I can't think of any other writing that's this generous, profuse, positive in the best sense. That very particular positivity, which bowls me over as a devotee of the negative, is something I hope to examine in a future post--but for now I'll just mention the free and light affirmation of thinking that rests on strata of critical awareness, an innocence that has earned its place by insisting on openness (and not on innocence, naivete) throughout Hejinian's writing career.

Generous, profuse: this close attention to such a wealth of particulars (I find it elsewhere only in Ron Silliman's writing and, in a different way, in Rae Armantrout's; in all cases arriving somewhere Proust only could have dreamt of): anything that comes into the day (animals, plants, talk, weather, objects of all kinds) and the ways a day takes shape; dreams; stories already told and newly invented; the language of other writers (poets, correspondents, novelists, philosophers, memoirists); instances of what would be "pure language" if anything in this writing were "pure;" jokes; philosophical propositions... anything may come in, and does.

And a profusion of styles and durations of abiding in one area of subject matter or another: the reading's large selection from The Book of a Thousand Eyes included a sequence of odd "faerie tales," tiny instances of speech, an extended description of the attitudes of mothers and children in a Blockbuster Video, a series of wildly varied tangents that ended in a catalog of facts about Malta, lyric poems and a portrait of a war zone.

And not just generous in the kinds of things the writing includes, but in what it gets those things to do. The Hejinianian (what a fine adjective to coin) poem can (at different times, and often at the same time) seem like a catalog of things, or of events (which, in this writing, are generally particular connections between things--or things and thoughts--making contexts for each other, producing a singular temporal form with its own shape and extension)--in which case one gets the sense of all this world laid out spatially. And/or the sense of a path through the world (the path of one's living), in which all these things and thoughts are encountered, their time and the time of one's experience intersecting and producing one another. All this has to do with what the language is about. There's also the status of all these particulars as specifically linguistic particulars; they are encountered in thought (by the poet and by readers/listeners) as words, phrases, lines, stanzas and sentences, and the shifting variety of the language is equally a part of the work. (Not-so-)finally, there's the relation of all this to a special set of particulars: the philosophical propositions that have been increasingly frequent in Hejinian's writing since Happily. These especially tend toward statements about the nature of temporal experience and phenomenological observations about appearance and event.

At the reception, I asked Hejinian about the status of this philosophical language in relation to everything else in the work: does it have a special status? If there's a general statement about temporality, are the descriptive particulars examples of that, objects to illustrate it or be illuminated by it? Is a proposition rather just another particular, a thought that comes into the poem with the other thoughts and observations? She told me that these propositions are in fact things she stands behind, but that they shouldn't be considered "pearls of wisdom." The function of the concrete particulars with relation to them is to show those committed philosophical positions as fundamentally context-dependent, their truth a matter of what there is and what happens (my paraphrase). To render the propositions less stable, less certain.

This is an area in which Hejinian's writing is particularly important to me: like no other poet, she's philosophizing in her work, not just quoting philosophy, referring to it or playing with it (I do, I should point out, like those latter approaches as well--and Hejinian is playful with philosophy). When I was finishing my BA in philosophy in San Diego, I repeatedly came to the conclusion that philosophy, in any form it's taken so far, can't really handle particulars--even in its most literary, empiricist or phenomenologically descriptive modes it subsumes them under general concepts and makes them illustrations of the latter. Some writers come closer than others (Adorno in Minima Moralia), and a number can provide revolutionary ways of thinking that, while they end up moored in generality within the work of a given writer, can be astonishingly illuminating and valuable in daily experience (Heidegger). It really does take the kind of paratactic approach native to art (for instance, to poetry, or to hybrid forms that poetry will accept and philosophy, even at its furthest margins, will not) to juxtapose the general and the particular in a mutually conditioning way, to let each have its independence as well as its dance with the other--and to embody, enact a way (shape, behavior, style, speed, rhythm) of thinking or a general concept, which in good philosophy is already a more important task than the direct statement or description of that way of thinking or concept. The last decade of Hejinian's writing is breaking absolutely new ground in this regard, opening up a whole new field of possibilities for poetry.

From work to work a philosophical focus tends to be foregrounded, in intimate relation to a particular linguistic issue. In Happily the adverb first comes into full prominence: the adverb says how something is going, and this "howness" of a "going" becomes the primary structure of experience. "Along comes something--launched in context." Things are always on their way, in transition, with a particular set of ways and speeds of moving--and, in fact, "things" and "states" are redefined as events, less "essential" than the becoming of which they are coagulations or glittering configurations. And these transitions aren't just in linear time (linear time is in question in this writing), but also between perspectives--of the things themselves, which include us and the poet. As Hejinian writes (somewhere in The Language of Inquiry) about the way she thinks of the lines in her poems, any place is the center; from any starting point the mutual contextualizations of things immediately will have already begun to crystallize into events, which vanish into others. This all ties back into the title of the work, the investigation of the connection between "happily" and "happens" and "happenstance," the question "is happiness the name for our (involuntary) complicity with chance?," ideas about time taking on particular shapes: stories make moments seem like additions to, rather than subtractions from, one's life; a move into context ("the chance that time takes") is a move outside ourselves, or into the outside we're included in, into the possibility of encounters ("The matter is here//Can we share its kind of existence?") in which temporal experience is primarily a relation to a future characterized by offering, the constant opening of beginnings. This leads to ethical investigations: to launch oneself in context is to affirm what there is, but the primacy of the future makes this into a commitment to attend to what's possible.* These joyous affirmations are risks. The fullest openness would also be the greatest vulnerability, because in that way of being there would be so many things that so crucially matter.

This is getting abstract, and would require another post to be brought back to coherence.

In A Border Comedy a focus is on story, narrative, forward motion and images, and the language that goes along with those. In The Fatalist a view of time from the point of view of "what will have happened" structures a way of writing that employs sentences, but takes the phrase as its basic unit, linking phrases with varying degrees of semantic continuity or cognitive distance from one another. Each sentence becomes a path defined by the way it's going in terms of how what has already happened will look in retrospect from the place toward which it seems, right now, to be headed. The ethical questions get more pronounced.

These investigations of temporal experience, with their shifting focus from work to work, are more or less consistent throughout Hejinian's last bunch of books--which makes me feel that her answer to my question is (not wrong, but) incomplete (not that I'd expect a complete answer at a reception). Though her many statements are certainly always "in context," and they successfully avoid the sense "oh, this is what this is all about," the commitment to them is strong and ongoing. The motivation behind my question is the further question, "how do you do it?." When I start trying to answer this for myself, I tend to get caught up in notes on the philosophical standpoint of the work (especially since the topics about which Hejinian is thinking are so often those with which I've been obsessed for some time--we do seem to be into the same philosophers, for example), and to temporarily forget about the experiential character of actually reading it, and this misses the answer to the question entirely. What's necessary is probably a patient description of what happens when I read the work, and a more detailed analysis of the linguistic particulars in it. In any case, this writing is generous even in the problems it offers me, the thrilling interest of its difficulties and the prospect of infinite reasons to read it again and again.

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Wednesday, April 16, 2008

Putting the new Cannot Exist together is very pleasing. There's such good poetry out there, and I feel fortunate to have been sent so much for my little magazine. Spring has arrived in all its splendor in Madison, though, and it's hard to stay indoors to do layout.

So I won't.

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Monday, April 14, 2008

For National Poetry Month, I've been going to work at the library in my one suit and brown bow tie, distributing a pretty wide range of poems from a box at the circ desk. The distribution of people's likes and dislikes is interesting: people find Frank O'Hara depressing (it's one of the funny early poems), prefer Rae Armantrout to William Blake, seem to really enjoy Bob Perelman's "Trees" (from his early book Primer, which is pretty odd) and Fanny Howe, while not expressing much interest in Auden. Everyone, of course, likes Dickinson, Silverstein, Lewis Carroll, and many kids just want to read whatever they get out loud--I got to hear a nine-year-old (I'd guess) boy recite Hart Crane's "Passage" the other day. I'm pretty pleased that so many people get excited about the idea, having been ready for rejection when I started this little project.

Today an elderly woman pulled "Often I am Permitted to Return to a Meadow" from the box, looked at it, and asked me, "Are you Robert Duncan?" I simply didn't know what to say.
"Do you want to walk in the woods?"

"Does a bear shit in them?"

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Saturday, April 12, 2008

The fine poet and editor Lars Palm has been so kind as to publish some recent things of mine on his new blog-journal,
Dromedaries. His last journal, Luzmag, is still up, and chock full of good stuff.

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Friday, April 04, 2008

reading in Madison

Andy Gricevich and Rick Burkhardt will read unusual,
often political, sometimes humorous poems this Sunday
at Avol's Bookstore in Madison, partly in celebration
of Cannot Exist magazine. Hope you can make it!

Sunday, April 6th, 2 p.m.
Avol's Bookstore
315 W. Gorham St. (@ State)
Free

Andy Gricevich and Rick Burkhardt

Andy Gricevich edits CANNOT EXIST, a poetry magazine
and small press in Madison. His poems and essays have
been published in numerous print and online journals,
most recently in "Pinstripe Fedora," "Dromedaries" and
"EAOGH." He occasionally posts ruminations on his
blog, "Otherwise," performs regularly with the Prince
Myshkins and the Nonsense Company, and is
uncomfortably writing this in the third person.
http://cannotexist.blogspot.com
http://ndgwriting.blogspot.com


from RETURN POLICY

Give up, my dear
this rack of heat
holding the bubble of your room.

No poet wants to know
what you kind of
feel embarrassed about.

Their concern
is with the bee
that pushed through

where the screen meets the window,
with sweet maple and cops
sweeping up for the holiday…

drowning the clatter of coins
shaken in a paper cup this
weighted season. Leave

the shrug of resignation
to the experts,

Operation Voltage
the lineup
and the gale




Rick Burkhardt is an award-winning composer, playwright, poet,
and songwriter whose music and text pieces have been
performed throughout the US and in Europe, Canada, Mexico,
Australia, and New Zealand by a wide variety of theater and music
ensembles. His poetry has been published in Mirage (A Periodical), admit2,
and Cannot Exist.
http://rickburkhardt.com
http://nonsensecompany.com


Once again the news told us
it had shocked the world. But it was

a new millenium: the paperboy shuffled
his briefcase to the office, squinting nervously away

from potential customers.

Keeping a promise.
"Making good on" it.

A photograph holding a photograph that says
"Have you seen me?"

Friday, March 28, 2008

Laura Sims: a close reading

My friend Amy, having read the first issue of Cannot Exist, the magazine I'm editing, said of Laura Sims' poems in that issue that she "didn't know what to do with them" (she said it in a perfectly friendly way). I realized that, while all of Sims' work in the magazine appeals to me strongly in an intuitive way, I wasn't able to articulate exactly what I liked about them, aside from a few generalities. After thinking about it for a while, I came up with the following close reading of one of the poems. It's part of a sequence called "Murder is for murderers," and appears on page 24 of the magazine:

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Let time tie a millstone & pass



Through exits the children

Draw water



You fathom



What sticks in the five

Small emergency doors could be




More



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There’s a setting: I imagine an old mill by a stream or river, kids “drawing water.” I imagine this as an archetypal scene, the sort of place where strange things are discovered—a simultaneously idyllic and creepy potential here (think Stephen King’s “The Body,” aka Stand By Me—in which I, having grown up wandering old railroad tracks, creeks and collapsing buildings in woods and overgrown lots, always felt the idyllic side as strongly as, if not more than, the creepy).


But I didn’t start with this; I started with counting.
The first line in the poem’s fourth stanza contains five one-syllable words (like five sticks). It’s also, if you count the title as also a line (which I think is justified here, for various reasons), the fifth line. The next line also contains five words, but “emergency” is four syllables. The word itself is a disruption or crisis in the sonic and rhythmic patterning, a metric emergency. This effect is strengthened by the stress patterns in the stanza. The pattern in the first stanza is something like:

What sticks in the five

(You could stress “what” as well, but I think sticks would still come off as a bit more heavily emphasized). There’s a lilting stressed-unstressed rhythm to the line. The next line, however, comes off as having every syllable stressed: a bit more on the second syllable of “emergency” than on the rest of the word, but not much. The stresses vary, so that the line’s rhythm comes off as something like:

dah—dit-dit-dit-dit —dah dih dih

with that “emergency” in its insistent, alarm-like rhythm, framed by those slightly longer sounds, as if it’s a call in Morse code or an alarm, and followed by those two softer beats, as if the alarm is failing, fading off into a silence to be inhabited by the final “More.” When I let the syntax flow from “five” into the next line, then “small” feels more rhythmically connected to “emergency” than “doors” does—which would make “small emergency” into a (five-syllable) unit. So we have multiple, irreconcilable patterns on top of each other here, and instability that the word “emergency” embodies.

Going back to the title: visually, there are five one-syllable words, if you don’t count the ampersand as a word; audibly, there are five strong beats:

Let time tie a millstone & pass

It’s a similar pattern to that in the “emergency” line—but it’s not yet a crisis here.
There are seven units in the line, counting the ampersand, and seven units in the poem, counting the title (interesting that each has one element of which I feel the need to say, “if you count this”).
The sound in the title is interesting; it moves from short, clipped consonants into liquid and hissing sounds:

l→t(m)t t→m-lll-st(n)→sss

Note the way the “l” attaches first, as a short sound, to the reiterating “t,” and then later as an opening to the emerging “s.” It’s as if the “s” passes through the “exits” (note “s” and “t” sounds in that word) of the “t”s, with the “l”s as the sound of the “t”s’ opening. Looking back at my scheme for the rhythmic pattern of the “emergency” line, I find those four punctual “t”s. Then there are the “s”s and “t” of “sticks,” which lay yet another sonic pattern onto that fourth stanza:

What sticks in the five/ Small emergency doors […] More

Again, a move from the short and clipped into the hissing and liquid, the "s" first associated with "t" and then with "l" and "r" as they take over.

I can hear this kind of sonic web throughout the poem. It connects “sticks” and “exit,” and strengthens the semantic connection between “children,” “small” and “more” (one of “more”s many connotations being that of growth), as well as linking “more” with “draw water.” Once I start to make more obvious connections, subtler (even tenuous) examples start to pop out: “fathom” connotes depth, which connects connotatively to “more”, and this connection is reinforced by the soft sounds in “fathom” and “more.”


Then there’s the syntactic multiplicity of the poem. Because of its lack of punctuation and the grammatical ambiguity of a few key words, it’s possible to read it as a number of potential, overlapping sentences:

Let time tie a millstone and pass through exits. (or, “…through exits the children,” as in “pass the children through exits”)

Through exits the children draw water. You fathom what [those] sticks in the five small emergency doors could be.

Through exits the children draw water you fathom. What sticks in the five small emergency doors could be more? [where “sticks” is a noun].

…and so on.


All these connections, multiplicities, ambiguities, make the poem into a meaning-system. From these overlapping webs I go back to interpretation on the level of semantic contents. Here are some disordered reflections:

The wheel is often a metaphor for time. The title asks that time tie that wheel and inhabit its other metaphor, passing like water. The mill is the location of two different ways of conceiving time—one in which it’s stuck, circular, and one in which it flows.

A stick is used to draw with (to mark on a surface), or to “fathom” (to test the depth), or perhaps to clear debris from an underwater grating.

“Draw” is double.

“Fathom” is double: it also means “to understand.”

Who is “you?” With “more,” it’s the most ambiguous word in the poem—but “more,” as we’ll see, is ambiguous because it’s overdetermined, while “you” is ambiguous because it comes out of nowhere—it’s outside the scene, or outside the poem. Depending on the meaning of “fathom,” “you” is either searching in the water, trying to bring up what might be down there, or else “you” is the one who knows what’s going on here—which is kind of creepy as well: the observer, hiding in the bushes? The witness, or the one responsible for the drowning? If “you” is a murderer, and “what sticks” a corpse (see below), then “could be more” is really scary.

The idea of something being stuck in an emergency door is already scary. Something tried desperately to get out, and failed. If the emergency doors are exits where water comes out, then this poem might be about discovering something that drowned, at least in part. This, to me, gives “tie a millstone” a creepy connotation—as if the stone were tied to an ankle, before dumping the body in the water.

“More:” an excess, both in terms of its definition and as a self-referential moment. More of what? More water? “More-ness” in general? More children? The word is portentous, connoting something unknown and undiscovered; it also connotes plenitude and possibility; it indicates an outside; finally, it’s a word of longing.

What if the words themselves are the “emergency doors,” and what tried to get through was meaning? This is supported by the self-referential count I started off with. Then “could be more” can be read in at least two ways:

1) “there isn’t as much as I wish there were”
2) “there might be even more,” or “we might be about to let more of that through”

Meaning as water, words as “emergency doors,” kids by the water, drawing it (in both senses of “drawing”). Meaning as a turbulent realm in which humans can’t survive, trying to exit into the world through words, getting stuck in (fixed in place by) the words. The children at the place this process happens, the place where the as-yet-undetermined excess of possibility (of childhood—the “idyllic” side) is gushing through, at the same time getting jammed up in those socialized words through which it tries with such insistent (t t t t) force to come into the world.

The poem is haunted: “what sticks” leaves ghosts: the “more” of meaning (which is not just a lost, dead thing, but is also the open field of possibility being closed off). Haunted by “you” (which might mean you, the reader, outside all this). Everything in it buzzes with the haunting of what’s missing, what’s outside the poem: these ghosts, as well as the social world with its archetypal scenes and fixed meanings… and also, in that world, the other poems (like the one on the next page of the magazine, which gathers resonances from this one that I’ve just begun to perceive). Haunted by past and future, by places time gets stuck, divided into three tenses. The poem stages these murders, these gettings-stuck, these closings-off, but by its carefully structured ambiguities holds everything open.

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new poems

I'm pretty proud of the batch of poems just published in the new, and long-awaited (after a series of technical nightmares those poor guys seem to have gone through) Pinstripe Fedora. Click on the title of this post to see 'em.

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Saturday, March 01, 2008

on tour

The Nonsense Company is touring the east, now in the early phase of the New York FRIGID Festival.
We've already had a couple of nice reviews here and here.

Friday, February 01, 2008

announcing CANNOT EXIST no.1

Announcing the first issue of CANNOT EXIST
a quarterly magazine of poetry
edited by Andy Gricevich

to appear
February 1st, 2008

with 50 pages of staggeringly good writing by

Rick Burkhardt
Arielle Guy
Rob Halpern
Roberto Harrison
Lisa Jarnot
Kent Johnson
Laura Sims
Rodrigo Toscano

$4.00; $15 for a four-issue subscription.

Saddle-stapled with hand-stamped card covers,
with outside cover featuring mind-bending artwork by Benjamin Grosser.

Submissions are open for the second issue!

Visit the website for ordering information and submissions guidelines.

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Friday, December 28, 2007

The Duke corresponds with Wildebord Snell, first formulator of the rules of refraction

Dear Snell,

It is one of the great tragedies of thought, as played out on every scale, that significant qualitative changes only tend to occur when a quantitative limit is reached. There are objectively too many poems, or no more oil, or trees, or too many are hungry, or the body can take no more brandy and carcinogens and so the whole life must change. I think that a slab of marble is only like a heap of stones, which I smash into dust with the power of my thought. The resultant powder, however, brings on the sneeze of indifference. Not my indifference, but that of the world. It doesn’t care how small things get, though it responds to everything—nothing is empty, sterile, undeveloped or without perception. No matter how the light breaks up against the side of the house, changing into a panoply of colors that might, after all, be entirely specific to this region, or even to this singular and unrepeatable day, on which I have done nearly nothing, logged on and off, admired the snow softly piling up on the branches, cursed it with the next breath as if dividing time into such distinct moments would get me on to the next thing, despaired and smoked and coughed and cleaned the tub and reflected upon the past, trying to find the precise moments of change under the glacial sheets of long-since retroactively narrated periods or phases, none of this ever attains the scale at which things meet and cohere into an existence, mine or the world’s. That light breaks down into my speech, and in turn into a sheaf of mucous layered in the lung, and from there into a rattle cut into particulate clicks separated by—and including—a dimensionless void into which any excess can pour forever.

Imagine that there were two stones, for example the diamond of the Grand Duke and that of the Great Mogul. How should these ever meet beyond the borders of the similarities that join them in a sentence? (An easier question: how can we specify the relations by juxtaposition that have, thus far, been our only alternative if we wish to express the world as it may be prior to the arrangements of grammar? Scream?) They are divided not only by actualities, but by the seething plenitude of activity. Today I heard on the radio the sentence:

At the hospital where she died, some smashed glass and wailed

and the pulse of this was neatly eradicated by the swift proliferation across varied networks and stations of the same vocabulary. In order to capture this I wrote:

imitating the intonation in which
Benazir Bhutto has expired
the distinct rhythms of two reports in which
Benazir Bhutto has expired
hum of the cone
at the pitch of one
man’s voice repeating
Benazir Bhutto has expired

how in the fuck am I supposed to know why
Benazir Bhutto has expired
when the radio hammers away at this
until it shatters into its metaphors

a breath and lung
a past and hope
a policy and excuse
an offer not to be repeated

not to be repeated

This smashed glass is the double diamond.
Inside us, more machines.
We go downstairs until we jump
—and something cracks. Through the fracture,
we can see bodies, one oozing mass
against the crystalline firmament
of the way things touch each other from far away.

Until this crack in our own bones widens, there’s only the infinite descent that we can share only in terms of our knowledge that we can’t share it, even with ourselves. The emptiness of a second reading; the resuscitation of swallows which make their winter quarters in reeds and which are discovered with no semblance of life; experiments with people killed by cold, drowned or strangled, and who are then brought back to life… all these things confirm my opinion that such states differ only in degree. If you ask me in particular what I say about the sun, my answer will vary from ray to ray. In order to avoid your accusations of inconsistency or downright deception, I will withhold any answer.

I am worried. Since there is no life, we’re stuck choosing between resignation and something we can’t possibly imagine. How to stumble so that we fall upon it?

Why not sing with utmost grace
your goddamn ugly song? A lapse
nearly always feels good. The snow,
once a signal of something ineffable,
now just sits piled on the trees.

One died clowning, repeating
From station to station,
spreads. That was an example
of condensation. I lean against the window
and get wet and a cold. Something in Pakistan is happening.

You try,
which breaks.

Blood boils at the prospect of stopping, please
Leaves matted for discovery. Undernourished in the trap of this. That made
a likeable corpse unrotting in the backwards snow. She thrums her vulva
like a missed tone on the screen. He chafes his hearts as if it mattered
to the night. You like that in the present tense, but
remembering it is ow.

I have imagined for far too long
that you have pretended for far too long
to an enmity.

Give it up,
Dive.


regards,

The Nut

Friday, December 07, 2007

When I read Jim Behrle's sometimes-amusing attacks on the poetry scene and the responses of others to those attacks, the thought I usually have is "thank goodness I don't live in New York."
It often seems like a place where even camaraderie is competitive. I find Behrle's aggression depressing, largely because it's an involvement-by-negation in scenes that I'd find depressing (mostly because they're scenes, because I'm horrible at mingling, schmoozing, etc.) and would want to stop thinking about as much as possible (while still trying to pay attention to the writing of many of the people in those scenes, which I'm curious about or find very exciting). Sometimes, though, Behrle says something that makes me sigh with relief:

Meanwhile, of course, poets ought to do whatever the fuck they wanna do. That people like Stan need to hide behind Tradition (Tzara! Tzara! He's my 2nd cousin!) and feel oppressed by forces that aren't oppressing them (Society will never accept my poems! They're too busy bombing Baghdad!) shows the limits of the people who allegedly know better not knowing any better. It seems to me you write the poems you write and don't write the poems you don't write.
(Behrle, 11/07)

It's really the first and last sentences that I care about (I know nothing about Stan Apps (the object of Behrle's attack), aside from having just scanned his blog, which looks like it might contain some interesting stuff). I think those sentences constitute some of the best pragmatic advice a writer can give hirself, along with statements like Jessica Smith's (not quoted literally) "make sure the work is good. If it is, someone will probably publish it. If they don't, publish it yourself and don't be embarrassed about that."

I do think that good writing only happens when the writer takes risks, or pushes the consequences of taking one of those risks--but what constitutes a "risk" is different for different writers, which is why there's a sense in which the "new" is as much a matter of something that happens in an individual work as one of novelty in comparison to what came before. I think you can tell when someone's pushing limits. This isn't to say that pushing limits guarantees good work. It all comes back to whether you think it's good. If you like it, do for it what you think it deserves. If you don't, change it, pitch it, or file it away in the folder marked "do not open 'til you've forgotten what's here."

This is mostly very unsophisticated advice to myself, an injunction to not waste time worrying about historical status (mine--haha--or others'), to worry about whether I've read enough Flarf or whether I comment on enough blogs or read enough Tate or Weiner or Badiou (I'm at least potentially interested in all of this), and instead to write what I'd like to read in the hopes that not-yet-conceived desires will arise from that.

Thursday, December 06, 2007

from the circ desk

It is irritating to be treated as if you know less than you do and have more power than you do.

Monday, December 03, 2007

I'm Not There

The other night the fresh snow and still-drizzling (rattling) sleet prevented
us from driving to
campus for this week's free Godard film, so we decided
to hike on over to the egregiously overpriced Sundance 608 Cinemas
(where they charge you an obligatory "convenience fee" of three dollars
so that you "can"--must--reserve a seat) to see Todd Haynes' I'm Not
There
for a second time.


There is, I admit, the occasional dopey moment--but not many, and
they're more than counterbalanced for me by the things that are simply
fun for someone with my enthusiasms: the Rimbaud and Nietzsche
quotations, Fellini references, the fact that the Richard Gere sections are
basically film versions of the cover of Dylan's Basement Tapes. None of
this stuff, though, gets at the substance of the film's excellence, which is
there to be found whether you care about Dylan or not (some of this post
is the offshoot of a late-night conversation with my pal Rick, who sort of
likes some Dylan, but has always been pretty skeptical, and certainly
doesn't know or care much about his biography and "legend").

First, there's the level of craftsmanship of nearly every shot; in any
scene there's a great deal to be discovered simply by looking around the
screen. The subtle and the spectacular are both present. In the Gere
sequence alone (which I'll concentrate on a bit here, since it's the one
nobody seems to like much, while I think it's astonishing), there's:

--the shot in which Billy, gazing at the Missouri hills (shot in gorgeous
color), has a fast series of short Vietnam war flashbacks--except they're
flashbacks to the war as televised, which we've seen exclusively in the
Heath Ledger sequences. This is an instance of a fascinating narrative
trajectory: as the various "Dylans" diverge increasingly from each other
(Billy, the last presented, being the least literal Dylan), there are more
and more instances of shared memories between them, shots that could
belong to two or more of their stories. When, a few seconds later, we
return to the image of the hills, it's shot on video.

--the brief shot in which Homer has helped Billy escape from jail at dawn.
We see a shot of Homer waving goodbye from beside the tracks as Billy
pulls away on a boxcar. The sun is rising on the side of the train opposite
Homer, and we see him illuminated, just for a moment, by the new sunlight
shining between the train cars. A metaphor for film, perhaps, and (as Rick
notes) for the quick emergence and disappearance of characters in Dylan's
songs, but also simply the kind of gorgeous camera work that almost
nobody bothers with, or has the eye for, these days (or maybe ever).

--the composition of the sequence that leads up to the funeral: the camera
wanders as strange humans and animals emerge from behind buildings; we
see the buildings of the town of Riddle, brief references tothe world of The
Basement
Tapes, shots of the road leading out of town... this disorienting
sequence hides the slow gathering of all its elements toward the bandstand
where the scene is to take place, subtly gathering direction until we suddenly
realize we're there, with the whole town in attendance.

There's plenty of "artier" editing, just as accomplished, throughout the film:
the jump cuts of dishes being washed with the TV sound in the background
(producing channel switches because of the visual shifts); the difference, in
the Cate Blanchett sequences, between the crisp black and white of the main
story and the slightly grainier one used for some of the directly quoted
material (i.e., the reconstruction of the press conference near the beginning
of the famous London tour); etc.

More important to me are the possibilities the film offers for the expansion of
scale in art. How can artworks include as much of the world--or (and this is
different) open out onto as much of it--as possible? How to make it vulnerable
to the world's answering back to the work? I'm Not There gives me a lot to
think about in this regard.

Haynes sets up his multiple narratives so that they suggest perspectives on
one another. There are plenty of lines, referencing the larger social world,
that within a given narrative are casually dropped in and then left there,
but that can be seen retroactively as a lens through which to view another
of the stories. Some of these are gestures that ask us (or directly ask a
character) to look outside the purview of the people in the film and their
narrativized concerns,but we don't get that look directly in the story that
contains the gesture.

The largest formal instance of this mutual conditioning is the movement I
noted above: by the last third of the film, the "Dylans" have diverged from
one another in character, mode of presentation, and comparative distance
from the "real" biography to a great extent, seeming less and less like
portraits of the various "sides" of one person (some of the plot
trajectories contradict each other)--even as we see more shots that are
common to the experiences and memories of characters in different stories.
The switch to video in the shot of the Missouri hills is, of course, a
psychological representation of the resonance of the memory (of the televised
war) in the present. But it's also a memory of a past in which the outside
(the war) leaked in, in which the protagonist's neglect of the sociopolitical
exactly paralleled his neglect of his family and his friendships. Finally,
it's a leaking-in of the kind of film manipulations that characterize many
of the other narratives (and of the variation in film stock and technique
between sections that characterizes the movie as a whole), an invasion of
the spectacular, full-color naturalism of the Billy the Kid world (which was
untouched when it appeared in the literal kid-world of Marcus Carl Franklin's
"Woody").

Narratively, this particular constellation of examples sets up the incursion
(leak) of the interstate system into the town of Riddle, and the new
"invasion" of politics into Billy's life when he decides to speak up about
it. As part of an accumulation of various such moves, it has a more wide-
ranging formal effect: as the film progresses, the stories become porous
with regard to one another. That porosity, once it passes a certain
threshold, renders them so full of holes that they open onto the outside
of the film. By the Gere/Billy section, I'm unable to view the movie
without reference to contexts outside it. The section is set in an ambiguous
time: explicitly Billy in hiding (thus late 19th century), but also Dylan
in hiding (between 1966 and, maybe, the present) and perhaps even
Rimbaud in Africa. The scene itself looks like the Old West, but the
interstate highway system is being constructed, and its planners show up
in old cars that were new in the 1970s. The anachronisms throw me outside
the narrative so that, when Billy is jailed for speaking out against the
plan that will destroy the town, I can't help but think, "oh, criminalization
of speech and arbitrary imprisonment in the face of profit-driven destruction.
That sounds kinda familiar."

The fact that Billy is the least identifiable as Dylan (both in terms of
his story and as someone who, unlike the real Dylan, sticks his neck out
at risk of his life), and that his section is the one that closes the film,
opens the whole work out far beyond the "bio-pic" form, and is the strongest
argument against viewing it in terms of the accuracy or sufficiency of its

treatment of its subject. In terms of its content, I'm Not There is as much
a film about the question "what is/could/should be the relation of art to
politics?" as it is about Bob Dylan. This question is posed repeatedly, and
Haynes certainly doesn't seem to take Dylan's various responses to it as
successful answers. The film instead enacts the question, and does so in
an environment in which the idea of political art is snidely dismissed in
many mainstream and avant-garde art worlds. I'm grateful to Haynes for
that.

In most art that tries to address the question I posed above
(how to enlarge the scale by inclusion or opening-out), the expansion requires
a gesture of expansion that has to persist for as long as the artist wants
things to be seen on that scale. In big Russian novels, this is analogous to
a pulling-back of the camera, showing us the larger society for a while before
returning us to the lives of the main characters. In Joyce's Ulysses, its the
intrusion of a strange discourse that marks a point in the story as a
manifestation of cultural or historic layers that prod through from below or,
floating above the story's world, confer a greater significance on its mundane
events. Pound, in his Cantos, takes a "hodgepodge" tack, and the expansion of
scale is achieved through a greater range of collaged sources, or (when a
section focuses more closely on one main subject, as in the Adams and
"China" cantos) a greater speed through the chronology of his materials
(Pound is the apex of "inclusion," of trying to "get it all in" in a mania
for order). Ron Silliman's long works, while trying to get it all in, give as
much weight to the "opening out onto it" possibility, and in fact enact that
opening in the process of reading: the foregrounding of the reader's
processes of synthesizing juxtaposed phenomena into coherent experience
dehabituates everyday perception, so that I, at least, take a residual effect
away from the work, letting a lot more in, noting a greater variety of
particulars and connections. The gesture of expansion here is the endless
profusion of sentences (early on, in accordance with number systems),
tied in with the modeling of a depersonalized consciousness represented as
language.

I love all these examples. What I'm saying here is simply that they all
need gestures of expansion that stick around, and that this has its
limits. Put very formalistically, what I'm Not There offers, with its own
limits, is a mode in which a tenuous whole opens onto the world as an effect
of the way the individual, coherent continuities that make it up change each
other's scale of reference by making gestures that function as "expansion
gestures" primarily outside the continuities in which they occur--when seen
from the perspectives of other continuities. A small event in one stream has
an enlarging effect in another.

I don't see the film as an end-point, but as a gorgeous presentation of a
series of tools. I want to make political art that works with the effects of
micro-level juxtaposition while also employing larger blocks, continuities
whose own juxtaposition is fruitful due to their proliferating "leaks." I'm
Not There
, while certainly not Haynes' most explicitly socially critical film
or his most obviously formally radical, gives me things to think about in this
regard that I haven't seen anywhere else. And it's a beautifully constructed,
moving, scary, sneakily disorienting work of art that also happens to contain
some of my favorite songs.


Saturday, December 01, 2007

more terrible titles from the library collection

the children's book series:

God Must Love... Shapes!
God Must Love... Colors!
God Must Love... Opposites!

Were this the middle ages, philosophers would formulate astounding proofs of, and based upon, these assertions.

Thursday, November 29, 2007

"You teach a child to read, and he or her will be able to pass a literacy test."
--G.W. Bush, Townsend, Tennessee, Feb. 21, 2001

This is one of the 'best' embarrassing presidential quotes I've heard from this guy. It's the perfect enactment of the way his public persona works in the context of his political achievements. There's the obvious and ironic idiocy of it; he's thought of as a bumbler, a bad speaker. A slightly subtler level is the tautological nature of its reasoning--just as, in his politics, acts are self-justifying in a way that would make a hardcore existentialist shudder. Finally (and still not so subtle), there's the reduction of the value of literacy to the ability to pass a test--just as the Bush administration's agenda is to whittle everything meant for the public good down to what will directly serve the profits of employers and owners.

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The detachment I can achieve in relation to that quote went out the window when I heard Naomi Wolf on "Democracy Now!" today. I usually don't get scared per se, but this does the trick.


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In a perfect illustration of the power of fear, I responded first by thinking about what to do about fascism, then by buying things: Wolf's book and the bp Nichol reader. Then, tonight, I saw I'm Not There, the new Todd Haynes movie about Dylan.

It's absolutely stunning, confirming again that Haynes is the best filmmaker in the U.S., and one of the couple best in the world. I need to see it again before writing extensively about it. Cinematically nearly perfect, incredible acting, moving and strange, and characterized by a tone that's neither naive nor self-referential, that's somewhere between or outside of a number of other dichotomies of narrative cinema. Quotation without scare quotes. It's probably--in a strange way--the best film about U.S. culture I've ever seen.

Wednesday, November 28, 2007



Happy Birthday (now yesterday) to Helmut Lachenmann, at 72 still writing the most breathtaking, otherworldly music I've ever heard.

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some of the dumbest book titles I've recently noted at work (the library)

Anthony Trollope is up there for the "classics:"

He Knew He Was Right
Can You Forgive Her?
Phineas Finn: the Irish Member
The Eustace Diamonds
Dr. Wortle's School



then there's Nora Roberts, a.k.a J.D. Robb:

Immortality in Death
Rapture in Death
Holiday in Death
Seduction in Death
Portrait in Death
Imitation in Death
Divided in Death


...you get the point.

Then there are the romance novels of Sandra Hill:

The Very Virile Viking
The Reluctant Viking
Truly, Madly Viking
(I'm serious)
The Blue Viking
My Fair Viking
Here Comes Santa Claus

and lastly:

Kathy Reichs' Death du Jour
and my very favorite,
Deja Dead

Indeed.


Friday, November 23, 2007

I was sad to hear, the other day, about the death (a suicide) of the poet Landis Everson, whose writing I began to love a couple of years ago, when Kevin Killian and Dodie Bellamy published some of his new poems (the first in decades) in Mirage#4/Period(ical).

Here I want to thank them for that, to thank Kevin and Lewis Ellingham for their varied efforts in bringing Everson's work to attention again (I had heard his name in lists of writers around Jack Spicer in the 1950s, and found out more through Killian & Ellingham's Spicer biography, Poet, Be Like God), and to thank Ben Mazer for starting the whole thing off by featuring Everson's early work in the third issue of Fulcrum and encouraging the writing of his last years.

Tuesday, November 20, 2007

Over the weekend, 25,000 people gathered in Columbus, Georgia to call for the closure of the School of the Americas at Fort Benning.

I didn't go this year, but should have.

Learn about it here. This movement is part a history that charges the present and ruptures the membrane of the future, that possibility might flood the desert of the actual.

Sunday, November 18, 2007

"The possible contradictions of the war photograph now become apparent... the most extreme examples... show moments of agony in order to extort the maximum concern. Such moments... are discontinuous with all other moments. They exist by themselves. But the reader who has been arrested by the photograph may tend to feel this discontinuity as his own personal moral inadequacy... the issue of the war which has caused that moment is effectively depoliticised. The picture becomes evidence of the general human condition. It accuses nobody and everybody."
--John Berger*

"In [Goya's The Third of May, 1808], the soldiers faces are hidden from view[...] Godard chooses to take the camera inside the painting here, shooting the soldiers "face on" in a slow tracking shot along the barrels of their guns, while a voice-over states 'You do nothing to change yourselves'. This intrusion into the painting's "life" is not just a simple aesthetic trick[...] "Take concentration camps, for instance. The only real film to be made about them -- which has never been made because it would be intolerable -- would be if a camp were filmed from the point of view of the torturers and their daily routine . . . The really horrible thing about such scenes would not be their horror but their very ordinary everydayness." (Godard on Godard, 198) [...] instead of letting the viewer empathise with the holocaust victims in the face of anonymous oppression, he would give faces to these oppressors, which is exactly what he does with the Goya sequence in Passion. Godard gives an analysis of a similar "painting" to that of Goya's in Six Fois deux, this time of a photograph depicting Nazis in the foreground (shot from behind) torturing someone in the background (shot so the viewer can see his face). A voice-over says: "They always photograph the ones who are doing the torturing from the back and their victims face on." Again, this seems to be the preferred relationship of "objective" photographs between oppressor and oppressed, so the viewer can empathise with the victim. By breaking the plane of Goya's work, Godard challenges this commodified, archetypal aspect of mise-en-scene."
--Glen Norton**

* from About Looking. New York: Pantheon, 1980. Quoted in Tina Darragh's "Numb to Dumb," in Crayon no.4. Milwaukee, 2004

** from Godard's Passion

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Saturday, November 17, 2007

A couple of bits from my sequence Return Policy are in the new EAOGH, and in fine company.

Thursday, November 15, 2007

favorite tidbits from The Grand Piano, part 4

Carla Harryman:

The structure of memory is formed between what's been purged and held in. Why not make a formal writing experiment of what I never said? (17)

[The account of reading Genet as a liberation from Eliotic modernism on pp.18-19]

...the sex that delivers one to the surprise sensation of self-coherence through the smell of somebody else. (24)


Tom Mandel:

[on Robert Duncan, during the conflicted Watten/Duncan talk on Zukofsky in 1978]:

He didn't like Barry's attempt to "materialize Zukofsky, both textually and politically" [...] He shone, but his brilliance was frightening. His evangelical bearing--Christian and Spiritualist--scared me. Zukofsky was a Jew and a materialist [...] Only now, writing this account, do I realize what undid me: the Christian authoritarian use of the Jew. (60)

I wonder what one wins in these poetry wars? Daily life with acolytes? If that's utopia, give me la derive. (61)


Barrett Watten:

[...] we wanted a big canvas, of time and space, so unlike the twenty-five minute limit of poetry readings now. (64)

There is no difference between myself and what I do, all day every day, except that I myself am suspended in that difference: this is not me. (70)

The silence of everyday life is that it passes without memory, without recording. If only we could write that silence, we would return to everyday life. (81)


Rae Armantrout:

I identified with that kid even as he distracted me and messed up my handwriting (so that I crossed my "k"s). So the noise becomes the signal. (87)


Ted Pearson:

Everyday life requires an exercise of faith: that daily practice, each next word, will attend what is, as it is, and lead to what might be otherwise. (89)


Ron Silliman:

The second stage [of the Talks] was much more organized than the first. For one thing, everybody had talked about the first thing that came to mind already. (134)


Steve Benson:

[...] in Language writing, "self" became [...] all sorts of things, and next to nothing, but always something else. It didn't vanish, it just wasn't willing to be taken for granted anymore [...] (138-139)

--Are you saying you transcended your potential tendencies toward narcissistic self-preoccupation by--
--No, they were incorporated into it [...] The narcissism kept getting recycled by the social [...] Isn't political action predicated on identifying its practice with getting something one finds or believes one needs? (140)


(and plenty of other passages that aren't excerptable)

Wednesday, November 14, 2007

on The Grand Piano, part 4

I find each installment of The Grand Piano more intriguing than the last.

As the project goes on, the standpoints of the participants seem increasingly to diverge (I'm not certain whether this is happening in the writing itself or as a cumulative effect of reading). There's a friction , I think, between this divergence and Barrett Watten's ongoing attempt to cement the legend of Language Poetry. In much of his writing (here and in The Constructivist Moment), Watten is concerned to solidly establish the 'we' of these writers in a history of singular avant-garde cultural formations--to present the 'Language School' (of which he's, I think, the only member to employ that phrase, comfortably and without scare quotes), with all its variety, as a unified moment and rupture, a negative expression of discursive formations in a particular nexus of sociopolitical situations. Watten wants this writing ensconced in literary history, and for that he needs a myth.*

It's this myth that most often comes under attack when people complain about Language poetry (rather than the writing itself, which most critics seem not to have read very thoroughly): the presentation of an avant-garde collective, a unified front without precedent, claiming for itself a permanently oppositional status that these critics claim has become institutionalized, gaining power in terms of social status while losing power as a radical critique. This is already a caricature of Watten's presentation; while there is a drive toward a particular kind of institutionalization (of the 'school's' cultural significance, more than of the writers and their paid positions or blogging status), he most definitely sees LP as historical, and has insisted on the relation of the work to specific contexts.** If LP needed a defense against these dismissals, though, I find the fractured picture painted by this memoir to be a more compelling one than any instance of a more thoroughly theorized coherence.

Watten's approach has its varied antipodes and alternatives in The Grand Piano. Ron Silliman tends toward a more modest mode of historiography, crisp and straightforward (his entry here concentrates on the "talks" series, often unjustly overshadowed, in discourse about LangPo's theoretical production, by The L=A=N=G=U=A=G=E Book, perhaps because the printed records of the former are simply harder to find). Rae Armantrout's contributions are condensed, wry, direct and full of uncertainty. "I guess," "I hope so," and "I don't know"appear frequently, and (as in her poems) there's a discomfort with easy categories and answers. Here her recent bout with cancer and the relation to mortality that comes with that (which, incidentally, her most recent poems treat with a humor that astounds me) are juxtaposed with a nostalgia for an infinite, open time to place 'everyday life' (this volume's central concept) at a distance. Steve Benson's mode is an increasingly incisive self-questioning. Lyn Hejinian continues the philosophical investigations that have always characterized her work (though in a new and more explicit way since Happily), here meditating on the nature of memory in relation to the everyday and placing reminiscences about Tuumba Press beside events in the newspaper from 1977 to 1979. Kit Robinson (an exemplary poet with regard to the relation of writing to the everyday) here looks at poetry and jobs; as with the majority of his entries and his poetry, this one is characterized by a 'keeping-on-one's toes' sort of restlessness, an attention that wanders while remaining attentive. Carla Harryman's contributions are unsummarizable. They're regularly the most wide-ranging and self-sufficient of the bunch and, regardless of their position in the order of a given volume, seem to elicit the most response, from outside readers as well as from the other participants. They deserve their own blog post.***

Bob Perelman is certainly the most direct and skeptical questioner of the 'myth' (and has been so increasingly for at least a decade now), and of his own status in relation to it, both as participant and as critic. In book 4, Perelman introduces 'utopia' into the conversation, with its unstable relation to the concept of everyday life ("utopias aim at a clarified, just version of what everyday life could be; and in bad times, everyday life can seem like a utopian prospect" (GP4, p.116)). In this history, is utopia being treated as something that's already happened? Language poetry as entrenched, protected, "an unimpeachably recognizable object of study" (p.119)? Perelman's account of the panel "Language Writing and the Body" reproduces, in a displaced way, the same variety of investments in accounting for this writing that one finds in The Grand Piano, contrasting Steve Benson's self-critical performance, Leslie Scalapino's implied critique of narratives like GP, Maria Damon's feminist analysis of women's avant-garde writing (including Harryman's contributions to the collective autobiography, which contain the lion's share of its explicit instances of feminism), and Bruce Andrews' apparently 'LangPo-canonical' presentation. Perelman contrasts this event, in which he finds an uncomfortable 'MLA-like' character, with the Talks, which he found much more open, unstable, in process, utopian. He then recounts a conversation with Andrews at the after-party about whether there is, or has been, any 'Language writing' per se, and the answer is highly ambiguous. In conclusion, he asks who holds the "two-edged sword" that carves "the trench that founds Utopia... King Utopus or His Majesty the Ego"[?] (p.126).

It's less the opposition of this skepticism and uncertainty to Watten's heroism that makes up The Grand Piano's picture of a collective than it is the kaleidoscopic differences among all its contributors' work. As the project progresses, the 'collective' known as 'West Coast Language Poetry' loses, not its reality, but its subsumption of its individual members under a single umbrella (or piano).*****
The collective is coming to seem like something that happened (happens? happens here again? in any case, an in-motion occurrence rather than an organic entity) between its participants, in the crossing of the various shifting lines of friendships, collaborations, events, writings, responses, individual relations to separate social contexts overlapping and diverging. The collective subsists (subsisted? in any case, rather than 'exists,' 'existed') in the proposal of it, the calling it into question, the interest in it as an event and the lack of that interest as central, in singular/exemplary works and in ongoing processes--in the shifting relations between all these. Instead of a force, a wedge, a school, a set of rules--something being done, a real epiphenomenon of actual things being done and imagined.

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Two notes unattached to particular moments in this post:

--As this divergence occurs, Watten's own contributions become more specific, more essays in their own right; though they've had this characteristic all along, the deliquescent "we" dominates his tone to a lesser extent in GP 4, even though it does end with "we were just about to make a big noise" (p.85). Here he makes brilliant statements on the relation of writing to the everyday, on negativity and art, in relation to a series of presentations he gave in December 1979, culminating in the premiere of 1-10, one of those exemplary moments in contemporary poetry.

--I'd guess I'm more attracted to this dispersed picture of a writing community than to Watten's partly because I discovered Language Writing with a group of friends in Urbana back in 1995 or so (none of us had any idea who these people were, and the writing didn't tell us that either), in the context of a less lasting but just as multiple nexus of collaborations, enthusiasms and interrelationships, in which some of us (including myself) were given to bold theoretical pronouncements, others not, and in which all of us had different kinds and degrees of investment. The fact that this poetry took us by surprise, seemed so strange and estranging, seemed to come out of nowhere, that it didn't seem to form a unity at all, has become progressively more valuable to me as I encounter more and more people who came to the same writing in universities, presented with a small bit of the theory first, had it packaged for them--people who were given the arguments for the writing before they had a chance to encounter the writing itself.

*I want to point out that "myth" doesn't equal "lie," and that my preference for the presentation that emerges from this collective memoir doesn't equal a wholesale dismissal of Watten's project in this regard.

**There's also, in many of these criticisms, the always-disturbing hatred of what's passed, the reviling of the old, the "over" (which is not only cold but inaccurate, since some of these writers are, I'd argue, producing their finest work now).

***I haven't said anything here about the other two participants, Tom Mandel and Ted Pearson. It's only for reasons of space, but it's unfortunately typical; they're writers who have received less attention than the others in general.

****Either one will protect you from the rain; the piano is bigger, less mobile, and more canonically musical (the umbrella would require the invention of new techniques, and probably a contact microphone). Furniture and the Sitting vs. the Portable Object and the Walk?

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Monday, November 12, 2007

Here's one more recent one--a possible book cover.


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Those are some pieces from up to nine years back (click on 'em for bigger versions). I've been trying to pick this stuff up again. Here's hoping.

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Sunday, November 11, 2007

As far as I'm concerned, the most cogent issue in the debate between Juliana Spahr & Stephanie Young (on the one hand) and Jennifer Ashton (a debate discussed quite a bit recently in the poetry blogworld) is one that isn't explicitly part of either of their Chicago Review essays. It's a question placed at the meeting point of the issues of representation/privilege and anti-essentialism, and might be phrased:

"Can one be a materialist and anti-essentialist feminist?"

I want to give a positive answer to this question.

The anti-essentialist Ashton claims that anthologies of experimental writing by women reproduce the sex/gender categories whose radical critique is often a crucial part of the poetics and politics of the editors and writers whose work those anthologies represent:

When women's "innovative" poetry anthologies moved from an anti-discriminatory agenda to an aesthetic one [...] the continued insistence on the importance of the poems as women's poems transformed the contingent relation between the sex of the authors and the forms of their poems into a necessary one.
Chicago Review 53:2/3, p.117

A materialist response might be:
The facts show that women are still discriminated against and defined by their sex; therefore, the publication of a women-only anthology simply is still an anti-discriminatory act. Furthermore, the women-only listserv (another target of Ashton's critique) is a response to a situation in which, in public online forums, women still have to face social circumstances that can be intolerable; therefore, a listserv like this is needed so that conversations that might be aggressively disrupted, mocked, or simply drowned out otherwise can happen at all.

I'd say that Spahr and Young are materialists (the point of view that material conditions are the basis of other conditions). Since they're explicitly not particularly concerned with the question of essentialism, their essay and Ashton's response don't speak directly to one another. That's why I wanted to offer my own attempt at a response that's both materialist and anti-essentialist:

The argument is pretty simple. It assumes agreement with the connected claims:
1) The anti-essentialist project is not yet complete.
2) Being biologically female is still a powerfully (and negatively) defining cultural category.

Given (2), a biologically female writer will be seen/read as female whether she likes it or not (unless she works pseudo- or anonymously) . Assume an editor who considered all ideas about essential femininity to be inherently problematic and undesirable, an editor who wanted to put together an anthology of experimental writing that called essentialism into question. How might the anthology enact an instance of such questioning? I'd argue that a women-only anthology could be one perfectly valid response to the problem.

In any collection of entities of extraordinary variety, the individual entities are going to be grouped according to the most accessible cognitive categories available for grouping entities. It's only when attention is paid explicitly to a collection of entities "of the same kind" that one begins to note the differences between them, perhaps even coming to the conclusion that they don't belong in the same category at all, or that some of them seem to belong to multiple categories, thus calling the categories themselves into question.

Given (2), an anthology that contains a few women, or 50% women, will be read in terms of its proportional representation of two sexes ("twelve men and six women"), whereas an anthology of writing by women will, once one gets beyond its most superficial characteristic, sidestep that question, potentially offering instead the opportunity to see a wide variety within the category "women," and perhaps to ask "why do these varied relations to one's sex all fall into the same category?" If it's an anthology of "innovative writing by women," the common care for innovation might throw into even higher relief the unchosen, sex-based category.

This is actually all in Ashton's argument itself; she asks why "women" and "innovative" should go together in the absence of an asserted necessary connection between them. My argument is that they go together for contingent, materialist reasons: given the state of things at the present time, one way to exemplify the thought that would be appropriate to (and represent a movement towards) a more desirable state of things is to pragmatically frame a literary act in accordance with the present state, precisely in order to show its inconsistencies, its shakiness as a frame.

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Sunday, November 04, 2007

a hastily written excursus on "I Once Met"

I once met Kent Johnson's I Once Met. It was last night, shortly after I met its author. I found it to be (as I've said) both tender and funny. Why, though, do I also find it interesting?

1) There's a naturalness to it (which predominated in the reading), the sense of "here are some little stories from my life." Then there's the artifice of it (impossible to ignore in reading the full text): not only the question of the truth of any given anecdote (ultimately not a very interesting question to try to answer--though its presence as a question is, I think, interesting), but also the repeating formal structure, borrowed from Joe Brainard's I Remember, the various impossible or highly unlikely events, and the goofy diction of some of Johnson's sentences (his use of the poetic "O," for instance). These are like casual little Verfremdungseffekts, reminding the reader of the literary status of the text--though the naturalness persists. The work never settles on one side or the other.

2) I don't think I've seen an explicit consideration of "the meeting" as unit of experience before.

Why is it important "to have met?" So many people, myself included, talk about it.

There are, of course, the status-granting aspects: I can tell people, for instance, that I've met Wallace Shawn, and they will be impressed (I found him to be friendly, excited that I'd been involved in performances of some of his more obscure plays, amusing, a bit awkward, and very like Wallace Shawn). In any case, it feels good to me to have met someone "famous" and thus "inaccessible."

Within an art scene, of course, meeting a more-or-less established artist can be seen as a way to "make connections," advance one's own career.

Then there's the notion that an artist whose work you know seems like a kindred spirit, or just nice person to talk to, and that the experience of meeting them might be mutually pleasurable (this is all kind of obvious and boring, isn't it?).

(At times, I've attempted to meet more established poets based on this kind of motivation. Sometimes it works, and we talk about our mutual interest in some other poet, or composer, or sociopolitical problem or movement. I know it's working if the person I'm meeting doesn't immediately ask me what my last name is. When they do, it seems like the situation is being placed back in the "status" category, which I'm probably trying to avoid--as if they're asking, "should I know your name?". This is all very slippery, since they might be asking out of a genuine interest in discovering new writing, and not out of an assumption that what's happening is an instance of "scene-politics.")

(I once met Lyn Hejinian. She had given a reading at UC San Diego; she read "Happily" and parts of A Border Comedy. I told her how much I appreciated the way she was able, in this recent work, to fuse philosophy and poetry without producing a haphazard philosophy or a poetry with philosophical "icing." She asked, "are you in Michael [Davidson]'s class?" I answered that I wasn't a student at all, just a poet and enthusiastic reader, and she said "Oh, great! A real person!")

Then there's the meeting with the person you've seen around for a long time, or have even been in the room with frequently, but have never really begun to know. This is an interesting one.

Some of the most amazing people I've met are vast repositories of stories of the amazing people they've met (some famous in whatever sphere, some who almost no-one would have heard of). These people most often seem to come out of activist contexts (though some artistic ones as well); their meetings haven't been a matter of personal advancement, because their lives simply are their histories of relations with others, organized collectively around common projects.

The meetings in I Once Met seem variously to involve these motivations and more, and often many at once. At times the repeated formal marker "I once met" doesn't quite work. In one instance of this, Johnson writes that he "once met" David Bromige, shortly after hanging out with him in Sebastopol. This gives a slight shift to the meaning of the phrase; it could now mean something more like "I once met so-and-so for coffee." In one of the most moving sections of the book, Johnson says that he has not met one of his sons, a claim which a tiny bit of research shows to be literally untrue--unless, again, the meaning of the phrase has shifted: they have not yet come to know each other in the right way, never connected in the way Johnson wishes they had and hopes, someday, they will.

I'm trying, in too many words, to get to the observation that, by using the phrase "I once met" in a formally consistent way, Johnson opens to the reader's view this range of meanings a meeting can have between people, and in different social contexts. As in all of his best writing about the social worlds of poetry itself, he here avoids reducing the interactions taking place in those worlds to one underlying motivation or other. By choosing a more culturally loaded marker than, for instance, Joe Brainard's "I remember," Johnson points explicitly to a complex of behaviors that, in other works, he might satirize with a much sharper tooth. Here, however, the real uncertainty about what is going on "beneath the surface" of these meetings and the recounting of them (and their frequent fictionalizations) is held in suspension, delicately--and it's the attention to that fragile moment, in which the situation could turn out one way or another, or turn out to mean one thing or another, that gives the book its valuable humanness. The fact that the recurring phrase sometimes loses its meaning almost entirely can be read as an analogy for the superficial layer of these encounters--and thus a parodic critique--while, through the very fracturing of this superficiality, revealing the richer possibilities layered and mixed up underneath. In this sense, it's a call for patience, consideration, rethinking, care.

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I had a great time reading with Kent tonight in Milwaukee. He's a sweetheart, and a fine reader.

Kent read from I Once Met (anecdotal memoir-paragraphs on meeting/not meeting poets, scholars, his own children); it's a funny and tender book, as moving in the sections I suspect are made up as in the ones I think aren't.

We had goat curry beforehand with Roberto and Brenda; Roberto sure can cook, and it was lovely of him to set up the reading.

Hung out with varied buddies old and new at Tony's, one of the comfier bars I've visited in recent memory. Finally met David Baptiste-Chirot in person.

I feel like being extremely kind and considerate to everyone
and I feel like reading lots and lots of poetry. For very many years.

I also feel that I have eaten too much delicious pizza, but that I've digested enough of it to go to sleep.

Friday, November 02, 2007

tomorrow's reading

I'm excited to be reading with Kent Johnson tomorrow:

Enemy Rumor
November 3, 2007, 7 pm
@ Walker's Point Center for the Arts

911 W. National Ave., Milwaukee, WI


Thursday, October 25, 2007

Paul Chan's video films might be an excellent example of vulnerablist political art.

Three of them were shown at the Madison MCA this evening, and I'll write about two:

RE: THE_OPERATION (2002), a half-hour series of invented letters and emails from the Bush cabinet as they fight the "war on terror" on the ground in the Middle East, seems like a setup that could only result in sarcastic caricature (which could be perfectly good satire--"what if they really did have to serve in the armed forces"). Instead, the text Chan gives these politicos includes a more or less ordinary letter from George to Laura, a musing by Condi on masculine equations of war and sex, an anonymously delivered, predatory sexual message by Ashcroft, a press release regularly disrupted by static, a text by Blanchot on friendship. Some of it's funny, most is variously strange--and even the moments of "character assassination" lack any "nyah-nyah." I find the tone (or various tones) admirable and moving, as well as profoundly disorienting.

It's Baghdad In No Particular Order (2003) that particularly inclines me to give Chan the Vulnerablist's Stamp of Approval. A fifty-minute sequence of pieces of footage from Chan's 2002 trip to Baghdad with Voices in the Wilderness, this is "artless" art in the best sense; Chan's technique with the hand-held camera is, by his own admission, "not that good," and the cinematography has the look of any video shot by a highly thoughtful, sensitive and observant tourist--because it more or less is that, rather than an imitation of that style by someone trying to make their work look "authentic."

The juxtaposition of scenes is paratactical, as the title implies, though the composition is clearly thought-out. The voice-over (spoken not by Chan himself, but by a woman whose name I didn't manage to write down) is infrequent, usually just telling us the name of a person or type of music we're seeing. When the voice does wax philosophical, it does so without any need to produce an intellectual "ah-ha!" At one point, the voice says something like, "They only trust me enough to stare when I am blind... blindness is the prerequisite for clairvoyance--" a direct reflection on the situation of filming (in this case, a pair of fascinated, silent children toward whom Chen has turned the viewer screen on which they're displayed) and a less direct one on the intention to show the film to others. Both in the film and on his website, Chen is refreshingly unapologetic in his love of philosophy, it's always both interesting and relevant (in one Godardian moment Chan puts a quote from Adorno's Aesthetic Theory into the mouth of a girl showing a drawing to the camera, and it works wonderfully). His program note frames BINPO as a Benjaminian project, which it manages to be, with less pretense than any other self-described Walterwerks I've encountered (Benjamin might be the philosopher who comes closest to Vulnerablism).

I don't think I've described the film very well. Perhaps a single moment will illustrate it better:

Throughout, the camera wobbles and swerves, and there are many close-ups that are too extreme for the lens to focus; subjects blur in and out. Toward the end of the film, the camera lingers, in a dim room, on a series of (I'm pretty sure) black-and-white snapshots of people who have died, the shot so close that, in general, they appear as face-shaped blobs with dark holes for eyes--almost skulls. This closeness, however, also means that any tiny movement of the camera has a huge effect, and so part of a face will become clear as the lens is tilted just a bit, or the entire photo becomes visible for a second. On occasion, this movement results in the haunting illusion of the eyes blinking--the shifting of focus in different directions on multiple areas of the picture is disorienting enough that the photo seems to have come to life.

Both of the latter two films, and this one in particular, meet the major Vulnerablist criteria (loose and tentative as they are): rough edges (not as a pose, but also treated as compositional material), room for humor and mournfulness as well as Brechtian alienation, directness and philosophical complexity, parataxis and naturalism, the inclusion of the composing subject without the protection either of accusing or excepting itself, careful reflexivity and a moment-by-moment openness to what happens.

No conclusion.

The "footnotes" (aka "Part II" of the film, an archive of texts, sound, paintings, and clips from the film) are online.

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Wednesday, October 17, 2007

This weekend in Chicago, the Nonsense Company performs as part of Opera Cabal's Delusions festival.

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Monday, October 08, 2007

30 Years of Lou and Peter Berryman



Last night Lou and Peter Berryman performed on the UW campus, celebrating 30 years of some of the most singular, mind-blowing songwriting in human history, as well as the release of their new record, The Universe: 14 Examples, and 30 years of folk music on Wisconsin Public Radio. The concert bounced back and forth between their earliest songs and their most recent, and between the think muscles, cry glands, and laugh cortex, binding them in synaesthesiac rapture.
How can I express how innovative, brilliantly constructed, and rewarding these songs are? I can't--not without at least the audible presence of the performers themselves, their odd, friendly, lovable personalities and vastly different, unique voices (a difference that imbues their polyphonic vocal interweavings with clarity). And not without Lou's meticulous music: melodies that can seem simple and straightforward until you try to sing them and begin to uncover their chromatic intricacy, their surprising twists and turns, the meaningful variation in degree of distance between pitches, the morphing, inversion and reversal of intervals that effectively answers the old question, "what if Schoenberg had written tonal folk music in the United States?"

But (to ask another of the old questions) is it folk? I can't answer that question without being able to play you the arrangements of Lou and Peter's songs. One recurrent problem in music (and perhaps especially in the nostalgic world of "folk as a genre") is the obsession with authenticity; if a songwriter is going to record a march or a tango, he or she generally does everything possible to give the song a "march sound" or "tango sound," bringing in extra musicians on the proper instruments for those genres, producing the record so that it sounds as much as possible like the most familiar marches or tangos. So the songwriter has simply added another set of lyrics to the same music we've heard before. The Berrymans are among the minority who know that the way to produce something new, an unheard-of folk music, is instead to bend the tools already at hand, to write for the accordion and guitar in forms they were never meant to inhabit. It makes every note count, makes it necessary to come up with fresh musical ideas, employs a genre as a skeleton or mask rather than a fashionable shirt ("playing a tango makes me look so good"). Part of the secret is in the instrumental melodies; Peter's 12-string rarely plays a full chord, instead interlocking with Lou's accordion to weave the fabric in the which the threads all stand out in their varied colors.

I can't express any of this, or even the wonderful consciousness that "funny" and "serious" are in no way opposites, that laughter and care go together and that this complexity is simple and direct because we live it (that it's only regarding art that there's a rigorous division made--another consequence of genre and of thinking of art as saying something about it's consumer, rather than to the people it encounters)--see, I can't express it without the songs. My sentences run off into obscurity. All I can venture here is a typology, a list of a few kinds of songs with reference to Peter's lyrics, and even that is misleading, since almost every song Peter writes is its own genre (actually, I've found that he writes in twos--there are a lot of songs that seem like pairs, often 15 or 20 years apart--but I can hardly think of any songwriter whose songs are that distinct from one another in their form and content).

1) The "pure language" song, like "The Similes," the first verse of which tells us that the Similes are flying by again in the sky, and the rest of which progresses symmetrically from single-word comparisons ("like flies/like hay") to elaborate compound images "like a bump on a log despite a notable night beside the beckoning beach without a suitable suit until the furniture guy arrives and everyone eats a pizza by the door beside the shore" and back to single words, the whole form imitating the expansion and contraction of a flock of birds, coming down to end on the unaccompanied "like ducks" (bird songs are a genre in their own right, and many make birds the icons of thoughts and words. For one that doesn't, see "Some Birds"). Or "The History of Language," in which a story of a seaside picnic ends with the arrival of a century-old woman who sits down and begins to tell her tale--which turns out to be the same tale we've just heard, but in versions of English that move farther and farther into the past as the song progresses. See also "Odd Man Out."

2) Close to this is the song that uses "pure" linguistic constraints to refer to the extra-linguistic, as in "Bird Bird Bird." See also, in another sense, "Artiste Interrupted."

(those clicking on the links will notice that my categories are already blurred)

3) The "conversation song." See "Talkin' at the Same Time" (verses 2&3, 5&6, 8&9 are simultaneous), "I Don't Believe You Like My Shirt," "Orange Cocoa Cake," countless others.

4) The Wisconsin song. See "The Limburger Ballad," "Forward Hey."

5) The political satire. See "Acme Forgetting Service," "Elderlyville."

6) There's a category I don't have a succinct name for: the song that deals with daily life, the normal stuff, seen as weird. There's often an appreciation for simple existence in these songs that I find incredibly moving--and it's a theme that I usually can't stand in other people's work; it often seems to promote a love of comfort that blocks out everything else, shuts down the mind, a position of (in folk music) middle-class liberal privilege. Peter's lyrics in this vein, on the other hand, show a mind as active and unpredictable as any, and implicitly argue for a life kept strange, and thus outside various statuses quo, always on its toes. I think this category and #1 might be my favorites. See "We Don't Do It," "When Did We Have Sauerkraut?," "Red Kimono."

This post is way too long. All I wanted to do was express my thanks to Peter and Lou for their work. I can't think of many examples of people who've created a genuinely new art form by making their chosen field so capacious, opening it up to such a wide range of experience. That sounds like a good definition of the achievement of full humanity, and I hold it dear. Here's to another 30 years!

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Friday, October 05, 2007

Some quotations from Robin Blaser's 1973 essay 'The Stadium of the Mirror' (in The Fire, UC Press 2006):

The Other is not an object, but acts chiasmatically (Merleau-Ponty's word). Not a stillness. Not a rest. Always the opposite and companion of any man's sudden form. This is the unrest given to thought. And to our invisibility. Perhaps this is also the life of Beauty whose companion is a terror or coldness. (28)

Under the arrangement of words (hypotaxis), the hierarchies come to a stasis. A standing still. [...] Ek--out of stasis. Ecstasy. [...] Through the arrangement of words (parataxis), there is a speech alongside my speech, which allows a double-speech. A placement. The Other is present and primary to our speaking. There is no public realm without such polarity of language. The operation of its duplicity is the poetic job. (32)

An actual directive of all serial poems is that the series is other than, not simply more than, its parts [...] the serial poem constantly circumscribes an absence that brings its presences to life. (33-34)

The ontological necessity of what we are speaking is our invisibility, the companion of our visibility. One may offer another only a world, not oneself. (34)

Stops. The thought of totals, the original totalitarianism, is a rooted dissimulation and turns the present into the past or into the already thought. (34)

All true language is thought and so reverses into experience. (36)


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Saturday, September 22, 2007

Action Yes would seem to be a great online journal, given what I've had a chance to read so far. I've given a thorough skim to Joshua Corey's typically thoughtful essay on the possibilities of the Baroque for contemporary poetry (it deserves a more thorough reading, and will get it), and have scanned James Pate's intriguing writing on Wittgenstein versus "body philosophers" as influences on poets (I'll also read that one with full attention).

The one I've read through more thoroughly is Jasper Bernes' "On the Poverty of Internet Life: a Call for Poets," a great, relieving and sometimes frustrating critique of the depiction of the internet as a liberatory, democratizing non-space. Bernes runs very much against the grain here. Thank goodness. While I admit the unparalleled usefulness of the internet for many purposes, and certainly think it's done more good than bad for poetry, I'm thoroughly skeptical about the giddy postmodern glee so many express in relation to it.

I like Bernes' writing here. It's not just that I'm not particularly bothered by jargon and kind of attracted to polemics. What's compelling is the way Bernes deploys a lot of the same language often used to paint glowing pictures of the deterritorialized internet in order to make that picture look pretty ugly in a lot of ways. Here are a couple of bits that made me laugh:

In this, the funhouse mirror of the commodity, in which things appear to be more real than the social relations that produce them, in which commodities appear, in fact, to produce those relations—in this, the primary inversion of the commodity fetish that Marx described is itself inverted in the pseudo-emancipatory fetish of de-fetishization that is the user-generated internet. Opposed to relationships, here products and objects seem, in fact, the mere effluvia of an immense, acephalous process in which one futilely stakes out a section of the common and calls it “mine” or, more colloquially, “my shit.”

The point, then, is that to the extent that the internet fails to thrust me back onto my own lap, to the extent that it fails to render crystal clear the ugliness and smallness of the life I lead in all its terrible complicities, and to the extent that it fails to fail to escape these conditions, it is a vicious augmentation of the spectacular aerosolization of all that’s solid, a burp in the calculator.


Great stuff--and these excerpts don't give a sufficient indication of the ethical drive of much of the essay, its committed seriousness about U.S.-backed murder and colonialism. Bernes' discussions of IDF tactics as perfectly Deleuzian is terrifying. I love Deleuze, and this gives me chills.

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It's when the discussion turns to poetry that I start to have some problems. Bernes claims that "American poetry is the cracked mirror of contemporary capitalism"--a familiar kind of statement about art as the reflection of society. It's been said a lot about the so-called 'so-called Language Poets"' (or SCSCLPs) who, the story goes, reflected in their early work the fragmented, postmodern, thoroughly commodified world they set out to critique. This story has always missed the constructivist side of the SCSCLPs' work--the astonishing variety of their literary production, the use of parataxis to produce new literary effects and new kinds of thinking in writing that, I'd claim, one certainly can't find "out there" in the sphere of consumer-capitalist consumption. The production of texts (like, I'd argue, Silliman's Tjanting) that, through their arrangement of materials, make an analogy for the everyday synthesis of experience that dehabitualizes that synthesis, bringing it into conscious view--an invaluable political effect for a piece of writing to have.

Perhaps the all-too-familiar critiques of SCSCLP lean all-too-heavily on the early theoretical writings, and not enough on the actual poetry. But that's an argument that, with its holes, belongs in another place.

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Bernes' portrait of contemporary poetry as structured by the anxious Father, one "Son Realman," and by Oedipalized sons such as "Bomb Early," is all-too-familiar and none-too-true. The advantage of painting this portrait here is twofold: it makes explicit the situation that many poets (mostly poet-bloggers) enact without admitting it, and the situation itself is no less concretely effective among these poets for its unreality (just as the unreal value of money has very real effects). The problem with the portrait is that, while Realman may to some extent allow the power granted him to accrue, most of it is attributed by others (I've seen it happen over and over in Realman's comments box). Realman's authority as an arbiter of all things poetic is, in actuality, less weighty, worthy of fear, institutionally backed than the imaginary-symbolic figure the Bomb Earlies create in their attempted destruction of it. The anxiety lies not with the Realmans (who have little to gain or lose), but with the Earlies who go into conniptions every time the "school whose name cannot be spoken" is mentioned, each time an unapologetic pronouncement is made.

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Thoughts on section 7.2:

1) Bernes' general proposal for intervention by poets via work that isn't poetry per se is a fine one ("an improvement of, or de-sterilization, or re-politicization of public language").
When one gets into the specifics of this, the problems become particularly difficult. By way of getting into a couple, I'd like to draw attention to a few distinct art-interventions in more or less recent times:

2) When I saw the film about the Yes-Men, I was struck by the differences in efficacy between their projects. On the one hand, there are the various presentations they've made at corporate conferences and universities (pretending to be representatives of corporations or consulting firms). These generally involve taking what sounds like an innovative business proposal and pushing beyond the bounds of what the attendees would accept as believable or ethically viable (either by proposing an utterly ridiculous product or a truly horrifying process, like piping processed feces from western McDonalds restaurants to "third world" restaurants, where they'll be made into new sandwiches). I'll also put their tour as fake Bush campaigners, in which they blatantly proposed massive environmental devastation to the residents of various small towns, in this category. In almost all these cases, the audience made no objections whatsoever; the proposals were often met with applause.

On the other hand, the project in which one of the Yes-Men posed as a DOW chemical representative and apologized, on international news television, for the Union Carbide chemical spill in Bhopal back in the '70's, promising massive remuneration and environmental cleanup, was highly effective. It forced the actual DOW people to tell the world that they did not apologize, took no responsibility for the spill, and would make no such promises--in other words, they had to appear on international news and admit that they were responsible and would do nothing about it.

3) When I was in Philadelphia for the protests around the 2000 Republican National Convention, I saw a Jenny Holzer project: sentences scrolling by on a board erected on a downtown street corner in front of a construction site. I'd seen and loved Holzer's work for years, but this context gave it an entirely new function. Her charged sentences about violence, ethics, money, value, sex, power, etc., some of which I'd seen in museum pieces and on a stone table at UCSD, took on entirely different meanings in a large city where people were having their homes and meeting spaces infiltrated by the police, having equipment destroyed, being arrested and beaten in jail, blocking routes to the convention center, confronting local and national political figures and screwing up everyone's downtown shopping experiences. Holzer's sentences seemed to address this context directly.

4) Hans Haacke, commissioned by a major museum in Germany, once undertook a project that involved making meticulous reproductions of the most famous works in the museum's collection, one copy for each previous owner of that painting. The caption for each copy detailed the owner's finances, social status, and how he or she acquired the work. These lists of dry facts revealed a lot about the owners, particularly the more recent ones: some acquired the paintings through associations with the Nazi party during their seizure of 'offending' works; some made the money required for the purchase through highly unethical business practices; some simply ripped off previous owners who couldn't afford not to make the deal.


5) As interventions, the first set of the Yes-Men's presentations failed (though they're hilarious, brilliant and troubling performances). Instead, they revealed a problem. I'd argue that the audiences for the Yes-Men have been able to accept their proposals largely because they fit formally with what's expected in the context of a conference or seminar. If they hadn't fit so well, the ruse would have been up, and the performers would have been driven from the stage--but the fit that allowed them to say whatever they wanted, as long as the form remained acceptable, prevented their content from having effects that were particularly distinct from those of the genuine presentations in such contexts.

If we're to alter or intervene in public language, we have (by definition) to do it in contexts in which that language appears. Given that, we need to find a way to build surprise into the work, perhaps by choosing media that will get attention by its public nature, but using, within those media, kinds of language that shouldn't be there. Kinds of language, not just amplified, distorted or mutated versions of the kind of language that 'belongs' in a given medium. At the same time, the degree of fit has to be engineered with regard to the specific medium. Media like caution tape (which Bernes proposes) might allow a certain degree of freedom with regard to this problem, since the set of kinds of language that belongs on caution tape is so small, and since people are used to seeing it but not absorbing it. The newspaper, on the other hand, is trickier; how to push past the point at which no-one will notice anything you've put in, without turning it into an obvious fake (like The Onion)? How to avoid either too close a fit or too great a mismatch?

6) Speaking of The Onion, there's the linked problem of irony. At this point, ironic methods ("Home Depot for President, for instance") are usually highly ineffective. Irony is so ubiquitous that everyone is used to it; it's the place where nearly everyone can feel at home. Almost no-one is made uncomfortable by South Park. Irony would capitalize (for example) on the president's bumbling, whereas the truth is that the bumbling image has been historically encouraged in order to take attention away from the hideous truth (as when the CIA, sued by patients whose lives had been ruined by the agency-funded electroshock/sensory deprivation research in Canadian hospitals in the '50s, portrayed that project as a clumsy, misguided and failed attempt to learn something about 'Communist brainwashing' of POWs, rather than as intentional and highly successful research into the torture techniques now employed in Iraq, Guantanamo, etc.). This is not to say that irony has no place--just that there has to be something besides irony at work. Otherwise, one simply thickens the skin of the reader at best (a sterilization of public language), or (at worst) contributes to the obfuscation of reality.

6) Holzer's kind of context-ready writing has more appeal for me. The problem might be that it's easily dismissable as art. Even in that Philadelphia context, I don't know if someone who wasn't interested in being affected by the work would have been.

7) The Haacke project, by contrast, places itself explicitly within the context of art, while linking art just as explicitly to the extra-aesthetic--and all this in a relatively public place, albeit one that only museum-goers would attend. It's an intervention within a smaller public sphere than that of Holzer's work or the Yes-Men's Bhopal apology.

8) All this points toward the notion (already there, more or less, in Bernes' essay), that the interventionist projects poets undertake need to be of a wide variety, in lots of different locations and media, taking place on different scales. Any general statement I've made here is bound to find exceptions in specific work, and there can be no all-encompassing prescription.

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One of the tragic aspects of post-9/11 activism is the loss of the variety, creativity, and vibrancy
(not to mention, in some cases, success) that characterized the anti-globalization work of the late 1990s. Since 2001, we've seen a disappearance of that 'de-issuization,' the linking of many interests, concerns, strategies, and have instead been left with a pale shadow of the same old protest tactics, the speeches, signs and chants. In Philadelphia 2000, we had clowns, goatheaded bicyclists performing elaborate raps, puppets (those that weren't destroyed by the cops). In LA that year there were environmental activists in frog costumes, clown cops, poets, the Billionaires for Bush (or Gore). This wasn't just a colorful pageantry--it was a way of reaching out into a great variety of modes of public discourse, attitudes, interests. I miss it, and think we need it. Activism needs art, as it always has--but now more than ever. Bernes skewers the comforted flight of this kind of variety onto the 'net, and asks us to put it back into material society.

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Paid my fourth and (alas) final visit to the Jess exhibit at the Madison MCA today, and was stunned again by the intelligence of the composition, the humor, the precision of the technique, the referential complexity, the dizzying shifts and impossibilities of scale in the work. Not for some time have I had such experiences of profound estrangement; it reminds me of the first weird art that I remember seeing, as a kid wandering up the street to the art studios associated with Southern Illinois University at Edwardsville, walking through the grounds of the former brickyard and train station, coming across unattributed abstract sculptures in the tall grass, entering the building (always open) and exploring the painting studios, in the presence of things utterly alien, fields of energy leaked through some rift from a hidden reality. Or the first times I saw De Chirico's paintings, also as a kid (still my favorite art associated with surrealism). That sense of vanished human time, a resonant silence.

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Overheard before the Robin Blaser reading last weekend (with my unspoken comments in brackets):
"The thing about the Language poets [uh-oh]--and I'm sure I'm overgeneralizing [me too]--they've ended up in the same position as the New Critics, who were the enemy back in the '70s and '80s--taking up academic positions--they've become the canonical critics for the younger generation of poets [to some extent, yes, but there's a hell of a lot of resistance to that--and, in any case, the Language poets are so much better than the New Critics, and so much more fun!]"
[Also, they're poets.]


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A curse of being a writer: it's hard to have an experience without thinking of it as material for poetry. One could spend an entire life working on two fronts: to let experience simply be experience, and to find a capacious enough poetics to encompass all of it.


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Thinking about argumentation and critique:
If a statement is readily available, easily deployed, intuitively convincing due to its ubiquity, be as suspicious of it as possible. If you must use it, compose your language so that its former users don't speak through it so loudly that they drown you out.



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On confidence:

A couple of years ago (just before I started sending stuff out for publication again), I finally convinced myself that I'm a good poet. This, however, does not at all mean that I think a given poem of mine is necessarily good--or that I have great confidence in the future production of good poems. On the contrary: the uncertainty only gets greater as I go on.

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Friday, September 21, 2007

Robin Blaser at SF State

At the tail end of the Nonsense Company's trip to San Francisco for our performances in the Fringe festival, I managed to get to Robin Blaser's reading at SF State. I came away stunned, and remain so.

The reading was framed by an introduction by Norma Cole and the presentation of a Small Press Traffic Lifetime Achievement Award by Robert Gluck; both of them gave moving speeches that, unfortunately, have been erased from my mind by the poems themselves, and the talk between them.

I don't go to a lot of readings (not many opportunities here in Madison), and when I think highly of a reader it's most often due to the clarity of their delivery, the way they make the poems as comprehensible as possible. Blaser goes way beyond this. He knows exactly how to use his rich, musical voice, sliding between plain speech and a kind of half-sung incantation that recalls the way Pound would have read if he'd been less obsessed with his cultural authority and had been able to vary the song from that repetitious, irritating two-or-three-pitch range you hear in recordings (say, of the "usura" Canto). Blaser's reading always serves the poem. I was transfixed in a way I've never been at a poetry reading (and I pride myself on attentiveness at performances).

He began by voicing his gratitude for the fact that both Jack Spicer's and Robert Duncan's collected writings are in the works (which excites the hell out of me as well, especially as regards Spicer), moving on to read his "Great Companions" poem for Duncan. He then read Spicer's letter to him from Admonitions, followed by a couple of sections from Fifteen False Propositions Against God and the "God is a big round white baseball" section of Book of Magazine Verse--and then read all three of them again, without comment, a little faster but with every pitch curve the same as the first time. Then we got to hear half an hour or so of Blaser's work from this century, some of it from the last year, all wonderful. Ten minutes in he asked, "am I reading too long?," and everyone (a lot of people), a bit shocked that this question was possible, answered, "oh, no."

I won't go into a detailed account of the rest of the reading, except to say that the long standing ovation was moving and heartfelt. Afterwards I briefly met the Itinerant Poetry Librarian, who had draped Blaser's table with a beautiful cloth she informed me had "been to eleven countries and absorbed a lot of poetry." I wanted to talk with her, and others, more, but my mingling abilities, never great, had already been drained by the Fringe experience, and the idea of chit-chat after that reading seemed utterly innocuous and embarrassing.

I bought the expanded Holy Forest and The Fire, Blaser's collected essays, against my better financial judgment but with no regret, sunk in the writing on the Muni train back to the Tenderloin, in bed in the morning as a nasty cold came on, in the car and the motel on the way back to Wisconsin, last night when I couldn't sleep after thirty hours on the road. This is such important writing; Charles Bernstein's comment in his afterword to the Holy Forest seems right on: this poetry seems to have more to do with the future of the art than with the past. So fresh, so varied, so unabsorbed by us, we writers in Blaser's wake. Such political and intellectual commitment, such music, such weaving of motifs, the incorporation of the lyric and the epic with the essay and the diary. A poetry of capaciousness that always looks for a way to let more in, like Pound, Olson, Zukofsky, Duncan tried to open their work to the widest possible range of phenomena, like Silliman and Hejinian have done in much of their work... Blaser has an openness of his own, a freshness of thinking that sets him apart.

I can't do much more than rave at this point, still without a good night's sleep. I'll just say that Blaser looks extraordinarily good, not just for a man of 82 but in general, brimming with life that I can imagine taking him to 102. I hope so.

This is work one lives with.

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Thursday, August 30, 2007

Jess's Didactic Nickelodeon

A bike ride downtown with Rick to pay another visit (my third) to the Jess exhibit was the perfect way to shake off the strange nightmare, full of irresolvable disjunctions, I had during my afternoon nap. I spent this visit on a long examination of Jess's Didactic Nickelodeon, Series Two, 'The Guardian Angels' Guidebook,' 1955, a series of thirty-seven smallish collages (there were to be 42, but the series was never completed), each accompanied by a fragment of text, usually of about eight or nine words (the never-completed numbers come at various points in the series, so there are sudden breaks in the textual continuity; in Madison, the order of the last handful was screwed up, possibly because of these gaps).

The text is either directly taken from Sir Charles Sherrington's 1938 work Man on His Nature or is the result of some operation on it or reading of it (as a member of the non-JSTOR rabble, I haven't been able to access the online versions of the work). Sherrington's text is apparently about a connection between the neuroscience of his day and a language of imagination and dreams. The text in the upper or lower margins of the collages is beautiful, and makes me want to investigate further.

The collages are widely varied, the elements shared between them just numerous enough to produce not-fully-rational connections (dolphins, statues, water, heads replaced with globes, eyes, masks). They have in common with one another (and with much of Jess' work) an obsession with impossible scale, the tiny or distant containing the very large or close-up, unattainable perspectives on landscapes, cities where they don't belong, all rendered in cuts so fine that I could almost never see them, even up close. More contemporary images in this series than in much of the work in the exhibit, where Victorian or early 20th-century material predominates.

What I love most about the work itself is the way its two series (text-fragments and collages) affect each other in ways that would be impossible if the text were incorporated into the images, or if the latter were merely an illustration of the former. The images often have something to do with nuclear war and its aftermath, either directly (a street in Japan thoroughly occupied by Allied soldiers and shadowed by giant insects, a Japanese woman cradling an injured child), evocatively (an empty stadium littered with paper, a blinding glow or flash from behind a forest that's somehow inside an airplane), or by more distant analogies (a crowd looking up at an infant falling through the air, which I take as a reference to the "Little Boy" nickname given to the first atomic bomb dropped).

These references, clear as they may seem here, could easily be missed in the context of numberless dream-images surrounding them, if not for the relation of the images to the words. The text compares the sleeping body to an urban region:

Suppose we choose the hour of deep sleep.
There only in some sparce and out of
the way places are nodes flashing and trains
of light-points running. Such places indicate local
activity still in progress. [...]
(line breaks indicate breaks between collages)

Juxtaposed with the aerial views, deserted spaces, misplaced and mutant creatures of the visual images, these textual passages become descriptions of a bombed-out city, its center dark, some activity on the periphery (the suburbs? This was just at the time that urban planners, like the early cybernetician Norbert Weiner, were writing about urban/suburban structures designed to protect the outer rings while sacrificing the city centers to the nuclear explosion).

This apocalyptic tenor given to the images then reflects back onto the text, no longer just making the dormant city a metaphor for the sleeping body, but allowing the two sides of the metaphor equal weight; city and body, socius and dream world translating one another's energies. The body/mind relation itself a map of the social world, the involuntary functions that keep us breathing a parallel to the human potential embodied here in the collaged recombination of meanings, the dream world as constantly developing archive of possibilities, ways of composing the world alternative to the rationalization of planning and the bomb. It's the way the text and the images remain external to each other, their continuities distinct, never collapsing into commentary, that allows them to intertwine in this dialectic of insides and outsides, cores, peripheries, illumination and darkness. This is surrealism at its most urgently charged, and also, in many ways, at its strangest.

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Tuesday, August 28, 2007




I just paid a second visit (of at least three) to the exhibit titled Jess: to and from the printed page at the Madison Museum of Contemporary Art. Yowza.

Jess, known to poets as the lifelong partner of Robert Duncan (both in marriage and artistic collaboration), changed his focus from painting to collage early on (having first arrived at art after working as a chemist on the Manhattan Project, a job that led to a lasting terror of atomic devastation that infuses some of his art). Most of the traveling exhibit is devoted to this collage work, focusing especially on pieces meant for reproduction: books of pieces (some published, some never published), broadsides, posters for shows of his own work and readings by Duncan, book covers for various poets. Don't be misled, though. These are no occasional one-offs. They're rich, brilliant, complex and hilarious fully-fledged artworks that warp scale, address political and interpersonal realities, and bind wide-ranging literary predecessors together in kinky ways.

Jess's most obvious (and admitted) predecessor is Max Ernst (with James Joyce and Lewis Carroll following close behind); these are largely surrealist collages made up of old images (engravings, antiquated books of manners, pre-WWII ads, etc.), and feature many human/animal syntheses and replacement of a given object by another with a similar shape, such as one finds in Ernst's collage work. Nonetheless, I find in them a richness, density, complexity and humor that surpasses the old collage master (whose work I do love), an advance that may be partly attributable to the Bay Area poetic environment in which Jess lived with Duncan for decades. The use of language in Jess falls into various places on the range between the poem and the comic strip; one of my favorites is the second "Didactic Nickelodeon" series, in which, over the course of something like 28 pieces, a gorgeous text about breath while deeply asleep accompanies, a phrase at a time, a series of collages that show the infiltration of dream by historical disaster.

State Street in Madison is a great place to see these pieces; the cross-streets come at such strange angles and at such odd intervals that, at least once, I've stopped dead in my tracks and started to laugh out loud at the absurdity of the layout. Today it seemed like a Jess collage, cut and pasted together, buildings of distinct periodic origins juxtaposed, trees seeming too big or small (I'd think, "how did someone decide on just those spaces between the leaves? It's perfect"). This kind of hangover of perceptual alteration is always, for me, the signal that I've seen, read or heard wonderful art. Standing for half an hour in front of one of these pieces is enough to awaken attention to the forms of daily existence--and laughter, such an adept awakener, is also here in abundance. If you can't see it on State Street, see it elsewhere; it's on the road.

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Thursday, August 23, 2007

I've started a philosophy blog, in the hope that it will encourage me to take notes on my reading and write the little essays I think about frequently. A similar motivation led to this blog, with its focus on poetry, and it hasn't worked that well... so we'll see. Right now there are a mere three posts, and they're pretty widely varied. Just noting it here in case there's a reason anyone besides me might be interested.

Tuesday, July 03, 2007

I did get an apology from Jesse Crockett just now; he's removed the poem from the site. Though I think the warning still holds, I felt I should mention this.

Monday, July 02, 2007

warning about Listenlight

I've had a very unusual publication experience.
A couple of weeks back, I sent some sections of the poetic series I've been working on to Listenlight, an online journal edited by Jesse Crockett. A few nights ago, Jesse sent an email to the contributors, myself included, saying that their work had been published. When I looked at the poem online, I was baffled. The text attributed to me is about the length of one of the sections I'd sent in, and all the words in it come from one or another of the sections, but the similarity ends there. The published poem is a collage of mostly one- and two-word fragments from various parts of my poems, orchestrated into what strikes me as a rather heavy-handed, symbolic piece I would never have written. This is not a matter of altered line breaks and small changes; it's literally an entirely different poem, written by a different poet.

At first I thought it might be the result of a formatting error (the work I sent has varied margins that could be screwed up in HTML), but when I noticed that singulars had been changed to plurals and verb tenses altered, I concluded that this had to be intentional. I sent an email to Jesse (cc'ing the other contributors) thanking him for including my work, expressing my confusion, and asking politely for an explanation.

I still haven't received a reply to that email, or to the next one, which requested that the poem be removed or replaced with an original section, or that a note be appended explaining that the poem had been altered without my permission. In the interim, I heard from one of the other contributors; it seems his work received similar treatment. This contributor is studying with Lisa Jarnot, who wrote to Jesse and received a reply stating that he had "improved," "fixed" the poems. Lisa posted a message about this today to the Buffalo Poetics list, to which a number of other poets have responded with stories of having their work altered by Crockett without their invitation. In at least one case, the contributor was consulted, though Jesse was apparently quite stubborn in retaining his edited version. In other cases, as with mine, there was no acknowledgment of the poet's request that the original work be restored, and no move made to fix it. The fact that Lisa received a response from Jesse indicates that he was able to reply to my emails as well, but didn't.

The posts to the listserv indicate that this has been happening for some time. Just so you know.

Thursday, June 28, 2007



Last weekend the Nonsense Company performed "Great Hymn of Thanksgiving" and "Conversation Storm" in "The New Enthusiasm," a mini-festival at the Baltimore Theatre Project that also featured Wham City and the Missoula Oblongata, who invited us to participate.
Wham City's performance was hilarious and odd--a series of sketches and short videos whose formal strangeness and general absurdity made it some of the only good "sketch comedy" I've ever seen (they're not like Monty Python or the Firesign Theatre, but there's a genuine inventiveness the like of which I've only found in those two groups, and in the best work of Chicago's Neo-Futurists).
We wouldn't have driven to the east coast to do only two performances, though, if we weren't screaming fans of the Missoula Oblongata (now residing in western Massachusetts). Playwright/actors Donna Sellinger and Madeline ffitch, with director Sarah Lowry and a rotating cast of solo musicians (in this case, composer/actor Robert O'Brien), create some of the best theater I've ever seen; their new piece, The Most Mysterious Day of the Year, left me uttering sublinguistic monosyllables for the rest of the night. Both this work and their previous play, The Wonders of the World: Recite, feature fantastic and varied writing, incredibly precise acting (with a strong basis in dance, clowning and mime, though only occasionally actually inhabiting these modes--usually their traces can be seen in the thoughtfulness of every physical move), and a general aesthetic whose level of courage and care is overwhelming. I've tried to describe their work before and failed...
Donna and Madeline have no fear of doing the impossible (or at least the wildly impractical). If one of them wants a working lighthouse onstage, they're encouraged to build it, and they do, and figure out how to pack it into a van with the countless other objects their performances require. Their sets look initially like heaps of junk, with little room in which to move (and the set pieces and props, from the lighthouse to a human-sized birdcage to "the world's most comfortable bed" to a boxing ring to a gigantic kaleidescope, are indeed made from castaway objects and materials)--but every piece is used in the performance, and every piece of "junk" is magically transformed into a shining, essential object, awoken from its slumber.
In their performative meticulousness, thoughtful choice of objects, and the content of their plays, the MO displays a tenderness toward things that are vanishing--or have vanished--or are barely held together, easily shattered or drowned out--a tenderness that inevitably makes me cry (a response I rarely have to art--and it's telling that the MO's pieces aren't at all intended to pull powerful emotional responses of this kind from the audience, the way Hollywood movies and the theater that imitates them is so intended--an abuse of the viewer that requires soundtrack, camera tricks, all kinds of manipulation for its achievement... Donna rolls her eyes when I tell her about this). In the new play, the end of the private detective and the disappearance of Morse code are among the subjects. It's not that these are inherently moving topics; nor are they mythologized in a way that gives them any tragic standing. They're simply treated with the same care with which the MO treats old radios, typewriters, the world in its death throes, the art of storytelling, precise attention to detail, the fragile project of taking such work around the country, always starting, in a way, from square one, with these impossible transformations of what's too often neglected into a display of human potential that would make me feel lazy, cynical and mediocre by comparison if it didn't deny me the right to these feelings by its insistent examples of possibility.
They're on tour. You probably have the chance to see 'em.

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Saturday, June 16, 2007

Happy Bloomsday.

Sunday, June 10, 2007

I'm reading Roberto Harrison's Os--slowly, because it's dense work that calls for lingering. So far I'm very impressed by:

1) The economy of the writing, which reminds me in an odd way of Zukofsky (though the tone, vocabulary and apparent goals are utterly different). Vivid words in compressed clusters that, through the overlap of connotations between them, convey something that would otherwise require extensive theoretical elaboration and a loss of concreteness. The relative distance of a word from the one next to it seems to be one parameter at work here.

(The charge of the language--the fact that something always seems at stake--makes this economy more powerful).

2) A really intelligent use of the line break; it's often hard to decide if a line is a discrete unit or not--whether the sentence (they're not really sentences, though they often act like them) is meant to continue uninterruptedly into the next line. When the latter seems to be the case, there's usually something about the next line that makes this conclusion uncertain. There's a wide variety of possibilities in here, and Harrison, in the first twenty pages of the book, explores a lot of them (I like the variety of his approaches--though the poems clearly "go together," they don't settle into a style).

3) I've been struggling, in my own writing, against a tendency to always conclude poems with gestures that sound like endings. Harrison is highly skilled at endings that neither seem to wrap things up nor seem simply to break off in mid-statement (this probably has something to do with the general syntax of the writing--not quite sentences, but not fragments either). That's worth further study.

Tuesday, May 29, 2007

How the News Travels

I just turned on my cell phone. Instead of "Cingular," the top of its little screen says "AT&T."
The most hurtful, thoughtless and brutal language around politics today might be that found in the world of political blogs (particularly in their comment boxes) and online discussion boards.

Today I made the mistake of reading msnbc's story on Cindy Sheehan's retirement from the Camp Casey project. Unsurprisingly, the story conflates the peace movement with the Democratic party, and blurs the boundaries between disenchantment with petty bickering among activists, revulsion at party politics, and a deeply pessimistic assessment of U.S. culture. One glance at Sheehan's blog shows that these distinctions are quite present in her thought.

Things get worse if you read the comments on the msn story. I only got through a few of them before realizing that I'd better stop.

Sheehan's retirement is not a disaster. Activists burn out.

The real, ongoing disaster is bigger, more multifaceted. The war in Iraq is made possible to a significant extent by the brutalization of language that characterizes discourse in the U.S., which is at its worst in many of those online discussions that give people the illusion that they're engaging in democratic exchange instead of one-upmanship, bullying and rallying of masses to say "yeah, dude!" in support of their opinions. The inability--or refusal--to make fine distinctions, the thoughtlessness of what's written and said, hurts all life in this culture. It's not just the gleefully vicious attacks and smug assessments the right-wing media and the so-called "liberal press" uses to destroy attempts to dismantle oppressive social structures; this linguistic sickness works from the inside as well, when activists (and other collaborators) don't speak or listen carefully to one another, and when they can't think of roles, methods and terminologies outside those established as signifying activism.

My question here: what can a poet do about this? I don't just mean by writing poems. In everyday life as well as in poetry, I try to care for language as the medium of thought and social life. It seems like that care should be applied to some portion of this problem. I know where the solutions cannot lie: this problem can't be solved on the comments boards themselves, in the style of the comments boards. You can't make a careful argument whose particulars are well-thought-out in an environment so saturated with the opposite. Parodic critique of the available modes of public discourse won't solve the problem either, if it adopts the forms of the latter without breaking them open and making something different happen. No solution to the violence of language is sufficient if it reproduces that violence with a different goal.

So I know what won't work. The positive side of the question is harder to answer. I'm sure the possibilities are many. They need to be extracted from a very tight place.

Monday, May 28, 2007

Laura Elrick and Rodrigo Toscano read at Woodland Pattern today, with an appearance by Toscano's "Collapsable Poetics Theater" (the two poets plus guests from the WP gang). A fine reading at a fine place on a lovely day.

I'd read Toscano's Partisans and much of The Disparities, seen him read in San Diego, and paged around in his other work, and it's heartening to hear a poet whose aesthetic prevents settling on a "voice." The work in The Disparities seems like a critical mimicry of the channels of information we're surrounded by--dense and chaotic writing. The newer work retains some of that quality in its vocabulary, but seems more talky, if the talk of people "on the street" involved the direct juxtaposition of slang, internet jargon and the vocabulary of cultural theory. Often funny stuff that, when it's hip, outdoes hipness by quoting it--the ironic distancing of ironic distance. Toscano's poetics theater pieces (ranging from pieces that are basically poems for multiple voices to vaguely Beckett-esque radio plays) take this a step further in their polyvocal rendering of scrambled vocabularies.

I'd leafed through Laura Elrick's Fantasies in Permeable Structures a number of times as I contemplated whether to immediately buy everything published by Factory School (which, with Krupskaya, is the press I most universally trust to put out work I have to read). I hadn't been able to decide what I thought about it, but Elrick's reading certainly convinced me that I needed to read more. It's sonically rich and lovely to hear (especially given her clear diction and her thoughtfulness regarding tempo and pitch). Where Toscano's work is concerned with talk and multiple voices, Elrick's inhabits a fascinating set of blurred regions--between speech and language for which the category of "voice" makes no sense, between description and enactment... this is hard to describe without becoming vague, and what's wonderful about her work is this blurring that's always quite precise; when I don't know where I am as a listener, it's a very definite way of being lost ("I don't know where I'm going, but I know I haven't been here before").

And I hope I'm not blowing a secret by saying that both these poets are lovely people and great to talk to, and that everyone around Woodland Pattern (Roberto, Chuck, plenty of others whose names have characteristically slipped my mind) also seems enthusiastic and friendly--something I don't expect from art scenes, which are too often jaded, protective, and suspicious. I need to make it over to Milwaukee more often.

(Incidentally, I'll go back soon, since the Nonsense Company will perform "Great Hymn of Thanksgiving" and "Conversation Storm" at Darling Hall next Sunday).

Thursday, May 24, 2007

Tuesday, May 22, 2007

scan the ads for help

the night recoils

black hills thrust

I can't say
thrush I'm not
English

can't assay
not said today

it wouldn't leave

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Also: today's murder mystery title, found at the library, is:
CORPSE SUZETTE

Sunday, May 20, 2007

DRAFT

Late light mercurial, it's fine
to wash the feet
Then gold greens them
and it isn't.

We are in this
house or
shadowed
in its possibilities. Lying

taught over one end
of true chamomile
brown squirrel still
grayer nothing

can be called what
it is, not ever the
unseen uh
chomping at the bit

to be mice. the present
no. now
they tell us to concur
but not how. Hoarse

day of images,
flooding out the wash
of a single "moon." You
said it. This sound is done.
DRAFT

a nut
rattles its shell


how far will this get
before the hand shuts down?

tufts wane

laughingly rhymed


okay I'm drowned
in "the green drunk
slightly spring" dawn

and stop no bullet
or anti-immigrant
bumper sticker
ruins the fucking poem

Wednesday, May 16, 2007

Ron Silliman's comment on the sitting (or the walk) as a unit of writing. Very useful. Part of the history of ways to separate poetry from "the poem" as the fundamental determining unit?

Sunday, May 13, 2007

Just finished reading the Odyssey, which I hadn't gone all the way through before. Oh, my, it's good writing indeed (both in the Fitzgerald translation, which I read, and in the Lattimore, which my friend Ryan has been reading). "Crisp" and "clean" are adjectives the two of us have repeatedly used to describe it.

This love of crispness is something of a novelty for me, a writer with a general attraction to sudden messes, disruptions of the ongoing tone, instances of clownish performed ineptitude, places where structural flaws are so profound that the edifice nearly collapses and, in the face of that near-disaster, we have to look at the whole work in a radically different way (perhaps discarding the idea of a "whole work," or seeing the work as acting out a double life, as a totality made up of unstable and widely differentiated elements that, in their interactions, set off energetic events that call the totality into question, disrupt its thing(noun)ness).

And Homer does have this, too, in his way. The casual anecdote, the dramatic tale, the brag, the catalog, the elaborate lie can slide into each other at an instant. Mournful tragedy or gory and detached depictions of slaughter (reminding me at times of Sade) are suddenly interrupted by/mixed with mischievous humor or moralizing. Disruption of tone, sudden shift in mode of speech, the artifice of repeated motifs (often entire speeches), the explicit appearance of the third-person narrator in the form of declarations ("O swineherd!") and injunctions to his audience to participate imaginatively in the upcoming simile--Homer's text is full of devices and lopsided structures that give the whole work a great deal of air.

As I write this I'm making bread. I've never done it before, and am
excited to find that the dough is actually rising. I hope for a coherent
loaf with no significant structural flaws, but don't expect it this time.
I'm mostly looking forward to the smell of the baking.

The range of Homer's similes is enormous, the connections and comparisons often quite odd. Here's Odysseus, disguised as an old man, sleeping in the entryway of his house:
His rage
held hard in leash, submitted to his mind,
while he himself rocked, rolling from side to side,
as a cook turns a sausage, big with blood
and fat, at a scorching blaze, without a pause,
to broil it quick: so he turned left and right [...]
Odyssey, bk. 20, lines 23-28

And here he's hanging onto a tree limb above Kharybdis, waiting for his mast and keel to be vomited back up:

And ah! how long, with what desire, I waited!
till, at the twilight hour, when one who hears
and judges pleas in the marketplace all day
between contentious men, goes home to supper,
the long poles at last reared from the sea.
bk. 12, lines 42-46

Such elaborate comparisons could be employed as attempts to describe something that can't be described directly, but I don't think that's what happens in the Odyssey; the things described by comparison are often quite mundane. It's instead Homer's way of weaving society into the poem without subordinating it to the narrative of individuals. The similes have a life of their own and a much wider range than that encompassed by the plot(s) of Odysseus' adventures. Comparisons are made to farming, legal debate, medicine, cooking, politics, wild nature, the domestic scene... chosen to contrast sharply with the region of human existence the main story inhabits at that time. This contrast, and the development of each simile into a vivid and detailed image, ensures the self-sufficiency, the independence of the metaphor from that which it's supposed to represent. Comparison not to explain or make a point, but to allow unordered elements of the outside into the form.

It's in these similes that some of the most "crisp" writing occurs. I'm mostly thinking of Homer's descriptions when I use that word ("descrisptions?").

Actually, I should replace the word with "presentations." Here's a bit of Pound:
When Shakespeare talks of the "Dawn in russet mantle clad" he presents something which the painter does not present. There is in this line of his nothing one can call description; he presents.
(Literary Essays, p.6)
Similarly (as Mark Enslin pointed out on reading the first draft of this post), it's a lot easier to imagine the dawn than to imagine "rosy fingers;" Homer's figure doesn't employ a more immediate or familiar term to illustrate a less immediate one. He presents the dawn in a certain light.

Minimal and direct depiction of a staggering range of phenomena. Here I'll restrict myself to modifiers, particularly as used to present characters. A Homeric device: one adjective or adjectival phrase at most in any instance of characterization ("grey-eyed Athena" is a famous motif). When the adjective varies from one presentation of the character to another, Homer's economy has a complex effect. The restriction of adjectives puts the focus on activity, process and context (what the character does in a particular situation) rather than on psychology (what or how the character is). At the same time, the singularity of the adjective gives it a strong role in the sentence, and since the people in the Odyssey are far from what we'd call "fleshed-out," the modifier can often take over our image of the individual entirely, making for a vivid characterization, but one without a character, or whose character is less vivid than the aspect highlighted.
A display of a way of behaving, a "comportment" in relation to circumstances that's detachable from the individual.

This is the general way I'm thinking about Homer's devices: ways of setting a chunk of the poem free from the (anti?)heroic individual and his plots, allowing modes of behavior, aspects of persons, roles, economic activities, and ethical contexts to leak in from outside the realm of the story proper. The Odyssey's ways of opening out into a larger overall scale (the "world" of the Greeks as Homer and his listeners knew it), more than its presentation of the spatial and temporal scale of Odysseus' journey, are what make it an "epic."

the bread turned out just fine; improvements to come. funny shapes, good crust.
I'll try to come back and add more quotations later.

& more on Pound soon, I think... perhaps the vile politics in Homer, if I can find anything interesting to say about that... and I may take up the thread of "presentation through an aspect" again, fiddling with the lens of Heidegger's earlier phenomenology.


Wednesday, May 09, 2007

When line length is equated with breath, does anyone ever muse over the implication of speed (rate might be better) that carries with it? Is Whitman, or Ginsberg at his most Whitmanian, a poet with relatively healthy lungs who wants to get as much said as possible, all the time? Is his speech one without pauses, a speech whose listener is never an individual respondent, but rather a collective entity, inarticulate and unable to fill the silences that flash for a moment between lines whilst Walt inhaleth?

Since I've never found the line/breath equation that compelling, this is written with tongue somewhat in cheek. Which would pose a problem, were this breathed speech and not post bike-ride, sore-hands typing.

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Tuesday, May 01, 2007

A bit of context for the last post:

1) The Nonsense Company has, on its tour of the last five weeks, been performing Rick Burkhardt's play Conversation Storm, which I think shows debate (in this case, about current US policy on torture) to be a dead end when the basic gulf between the opponents is as great as it is between, say, me and someone who thinks that torture is justifiable and necessary.

2) While in Olympia the Company saw a production of My Name is Rachel Corrie. I was a bit worried about it, and was surprised (I can't say "pleasantly," since the play largely left me shaken and distressed), mostly by Corrie's quite excellent writing.

The play (which was first produced in England and then later staged in NYC after the original New York production had voluntarily censored itself, shutting down the production after many complaints from the people arrogant enough to call themselves "the Jewish community") is being produced in Seattle, and the staging in Olympia was a satellite performance (Oly being Corrie's home town). Like the other performers who've played the part, this actress has been getting death threats. I don't think I need to rant about this here. The juxtaposition of the critical but explicitly pacifist play with the psychosis of the attacks on it should be enough. Or one could add to the juxtaposition the fact that in Israel, where the majority of citizens oppose their government's methodical destruction of Palestine, one can discuss the matter, while in the United States one who isn't threatened with death will at least be accused of condoning murder and ethnic cleansing, shouted down until they shut up.

Friday, April 27, 2007

Argument as the death of language?
Sometimes?

On the other hand, Rachel Corrie's statements in her emails from Palestine, as neither argument nor insistence meant to loudly silence argument.

Fatigue in Seattle.

Pound's repeated use of "wherever," "so-and-so," etc. in the midst of the most documentary Cantos--sign of the documentarian that makes these more interesting than they would otherwise be to someone who might not need to know quite this much about the Medici bank.

Tuesday, January 09, 2007

Just saw my first W.C. Fields movie (International House, with Bela Lugosi, George Burns, Gracie Allen, Cab Calloway, others). It's a shame they don't make movies that weird anymore.

The best book of poetry I've read in some time is Rob Halpern's Disaster Suite.

They just keep releasing Adorno's lectures, for which I'm very grateful. History and Freedom is a blast so far.

The compulsion

to post something

Saturday, January 06, 2007

A friend (who I'll leave anonymous, since that's the way it is on the LiveJournal page I've linked to), composer, teacher, actor, playwright, secret poet, and extremely humble person, has been teaching at an alternative school in Korea that sounds fascinating enough for me to direct you toward the possibility of reading about the experience.
This book contains innacuracies about the moon.

(on a post-it stuck to a book returned to the Madison public library the other day. the purported innacuracies, specified by another post-it inside, were not innacuracies)

Friday, January 05, 2007

sudden sore sodden sure
sodden shore sudden holes
sudden sure sodden sore
sodden holes sudden shore

Tuesday, December 19, 2006

Blogger isn't great for photos, but here are a few of the aforementioned shots from the SOAW gathering. Click 'em for slightly larger versions.

Top to bottom: The Puppetista pageant; Saturday's crowd (merely 13,000 or so); the skeleton waves hello; cops seen through Ft. Benning fence; the fence w/names of the dead; me w/Holly Near; Charlie King eating a sandwich; George Shrub, the world's only known singing CIA agent; Father Roy Bourgeois (SOAW founder) and Francisco Herrera (SOAW stalwart and amazing singer); a smaller cousin to the Puppetista family.











I was in the backyard in the large loft apartment.

I’d never noticed the terrarium with its curled-up blue puppies—now they awoke and started to bark, and the german shepherds from next door leaped over the fence. I lay down as quickly as I could and made low humming sounds until they nuzzled me, one of them sliding a paw under my chin. When R arrived and they left, a smaller, bristly red dog appeared, next to (it turned out) a sign showing this animal with an entire soccerball in its mouth, its head huge, encephalitically round, with the warning, “Never show it Up or Down.” I tried to stand up horizontally, which somehow worked.

All this only weeks after I nearly “made love” to that giant owl.

I seemed to be the fifties sitcom dad with pipe in mouth, reclining on the bed, saying:

‘ “How did I make all my money?”, they’ll ask—and I’ll tell ‘em, “From laffs! I made it from laffs!” ’

Not sure how I knew it was spelled that way.

Saturday, December 16, 2006

Also in the last month: the annual gathering to close the School of the Americas. The best political demonstration I've ever attended, every time. Three main reasons:
1) The organizers know that art is essential to activism, so there's at least as much music (and some large-scale pageantry from the Puppetistas) as there is speechifying. Pete Seeger called it "the singingest movement since the civil rights movement," and there are fine, fine, musicians there every year.
2) More than any other movement than the anti-globalization nexus, the SOA Watch gathering involves people with a staggering variety of foci in their political concerns and their lives in general.
3) Formalized ritual tends to repel me on an instinctive level (I don't always--though I used to--feel like there's an essential connection between ritual and fascism; now it's more a personal discomfort, sometimes for political reasons and sometimes for reasons of "taste"), but the central event of the gathering--the liturgical intonation, for 3 1/2 hours, of the names of victims of SOA-educated military leaders, each followed by a mass, harmonized chant of the word "presente" while people leave crosses and other objects bearing the names of the dead on the fence of the base--bowls me over. I'm on stage, singing the "presentes;" the list comes to a series of "unnamed persons;" I think of the faces of my friends, there at Ft. Benning and elsewhere, and my friends fill in the voids left by that namelessness; we could be singing about them; I choke up, and have to turn the mic over to someone else.

The bill to close the School comes regularly before congress. Last time it lost by 15 votes. 34 of those opposed were voted out in the last election.

Here you can read the lyrics to a song by the Prince Myshkins about our friend Mimi LaValley, who was one of many to spend time in prison in 2002 for crossing the line onto army property (I'm amazed that we don't have the MP3 up; I'll have to change that).

(Incidentally, the prison to which Mimi was sentenced was built for the Watergate criminals; she says that every morning and evening prerecorded announcements would blare over the PA: "the swimming pool is now open;" "the swimming pool is now closed." The swimming pool was utterly dry, and probably had always been, since Nixon's crooks never ended up there).

David Rovics and Holly Near have written more thorough reports. I'll get some photos up here, or on the Myshkins site, soon.

Friday, December 15, 2006


I have an essay on poetry and political ethics (an expansion on some ideas presented in an earlier post here) in the first issue of Absent, an online magazine that looks excellent. Now that I finally have time to read through its contents, I’m carefully going through editor Simon DeDeo’s essay “Towards an Anarchist Poetics.” I like it a lot, and plan on posting my thoughts in response here.

My own essay (which is—I think—the magazine’s lone PDF, due to complexities resulting from my sending it in at the last possible minute) has had a couple of nice comments from Kent Johnson and Josh Corey. Thanks, guys.

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Two nights ago my friend Rick and I had the opportunity to see the International Contemporary Ensemble perform Luigi Nono’s rarely-presented 1966 piece a floresta é jovem cheja de vida (“the forest is young and full of life”), for soprano, three reciters, clarinet, six percussionists (playing bronze metal sheets), and ten-channel tape playback. The concert took place at the Chicago Museum of Contemporary Photography in conjunction with an exhibit by An-My . Lê’s work consists of photos of people re-enacting Vietnam war scenes and, in another series, shots of “29 Palms,” the fake Iraqi village (and environs) constructed in the southern California desert for Marine Corps training; it’s a twenty-four-hour-a-day theatrical pageant, complete with anti-American graffiti on the buildings and delivery trucks turning out to contain bombs that, in fact, destroy sections of the base. Very weird.

More impressive to me is Martha Rosler’s photomontage series Bringing the War Home (in two phases, one from the Vietnam era and one focused on Iraq, and especially Abu Grahib). Rosler’s collages juxtapose often brutal war imagery with scenes of comfy middle-class domesticity. Doesn’t sound that original, but these constructions are somehow absolutely irony-free; the war doesn’t just make suburban materialism look bad—it actually seems to invade it, suffuse it with horror and mournfulness. Especially in series, these pieces took my breath away.

In any case, I’d heard Nono’s piece on recordings before, and had been pretty baffled (though I loved it, as I do nearly all of his music). Hearing it live, with the percussionists and reciters in one small gallery, the soprano and clarinet in the next room, and the speakers distributing their performances and the prerecorded tracks throughout the composite space, blew me away. Nono’s settings of the live texts (quotations from NLF members, Angolan guerillas, Castro, and others, ending with the repeated question—a quote from a demonstrator in Berkeley—“Is this all we can do?”), always had an interesting relation to the language; the point is clearly neither to musically intensify the meaning (as if unmediated by words) nor to ironize anything (two bad approaches to text-setting in contemporary music).

More than any other music I’ve heard, Nono’s clears out the workings of my perception in a very concrete way. For at least a couple of hours after hearing it, I could hear multiple simultaneous conversations and understand them; sounds and seen things had a distinctness they don’t usually have. Daily experience tends to blur and blend, to encourage habitual perception, and Nono counters that in an astonishing variety of ways throughout his compositional career (especially in his last works). The combination of Marxism and concrete phenomenological intervention—who could ask for more from a composer? Thanks to the ICE for doing it, and for doing it so damn well.


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Wednesday, November 01, 2006

From a staggering number of people I keep hearing the news of the death of Brad Will, the Indymedia journalist shot by right-wing paramilitaries in Oaxaca last Friday while reporting on the months-long struggle there, in which mass solidarity with striking teachers has been met with violent government repression (much more of the story can be found through the links above, here, and in plenty of other places).

I didn't know Brad Will, but he knew so many of my friends (and friends of friends, in folk music, activist and contemporary poetry circles) that his death, a major loss to many people, resonates loudly here in Madison.

It also makes the reporting of the mainstream press on Oaxaca more insulting, less because reports of his death leave him anonymous (whereas a "major" journalist who's wounded or held prisoner is made a hero) than because of its misrepresentation of the situation he was covering. Vicente Fox is said to be responding to a desire for a "return to order," when that's the desire only of the tiny upper class ("order" being the usual state of mass poverty); the truth is that many people are being worn down, understandably, by many months of conflict, chaos, and an even worse economic situation than usual. But that always happens in long strikes, including those that result in significant change.

Here's to the people trying to make a good life possible in Oaxaca, and to Brad Will, who was trying to tell us that story.

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Send a letter to Vicente Fox:

vicente.fox.quesada@presidencia.gob.mx

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In the morning language leaks

in. The world too always early

for representation, too late

not never only by a marked

difference. A small hole at the stomach

deflates scale, we who know those

who knew sucked to the edge

of the bubble faster than shots find

a heroic

coupling only

makes class

war

boring

in

slow

motion

arrival of

news at distances,

too many to

want to count.

A drill

or siren warning.

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Six month strike.

Squirrel chase rattles across the ceiling. That’s

how time gets marked

and pulled from circulation. Last night

we watched Breathless, and the guy who couldn’t make connections

said that people lie about Mexico. He didn’t mean Ulises Ruiz Ortiz.

It’s starvation and repression that make the struggle against them

so tiring. The Times says, “desire for order”

when it’s desire that’s hunted,

worn down.

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The belly vulnerable

to bullets, to hunger or

to being filled.

The gut is that hole

felt in the heart.

Monday, October 16, 2006

resolution

Soon I will post more here.
I think.

For now, here's what I've finished reading in the last month:
Herman Melville, Moby Dick
Lisa Jarnot, Ring of Fire
Renee Gladman, The Activist
Barrett Watten, Under Erasure
Lorine Niedecker, New Goose
Sarah Kane, Blasted
August Derleth, The Wisconsin: River of a Thousand Isles
George Oppen, Seascape (Needle's Eye); Myth of the Blaze

and finished rereading:
various books by Patrick Herron
Louis Zukofsky, "A"
George Oppen, Discrete Series
William Gillespie, California One and One for All

and am now reading:
Bob Perelman, IfLife
Landis Everson, Everything Preserved
Marcel Proust, The Guermantes Way
Rosmarie Waldrop, A Form/Of Taking/It All
Eduardo Galeano, Genesis
Martin Heidegger, Kant and the Problem of Metaphysics
and too many other books to enumerate here. These are the ones I'm confident I'll finish more or less soon.

Monday, September 11, 2006

Happy birthday to Teddy Adorno.

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Fuck Pinochet.

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Other nine-elevens.

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The Nonsense Company is performing in Chicago's Rhinoceros Festival.

Monday, August 21, 2006

Vulnerability

I just posted this in response to a strand on the Buffalo Poetics list, and thought it came out well enough to put here:

The claim that poetry and politics are essentially opposed is a sigh of resignation that wants to make itself universal.

In a recent workshop on "Poetry and the News" (given at Woodland Pattern in Milwaukee), Kerri Sonnenberg put some emphasis on the value of "vulnerability" for poetry that concerns itself with politics. The explicit suggestion was that a political poem is more likely to appeal to/reach a reader if the poet doesn't seem to already know all the answers to her questions (and, therefore, if the poem raises questions-- this said with the caveat that a totally open indecisiveness that anyone can feel comfortable with is NOT what's being recommended). There are a number of appealing things about this notion and the ways it can be expanded.

For one thing, "vulnerability," leaving oneself open to error and to multiple possible solutions (and to more interesting problems than the ones we're handed--and, because of all this, to attack), seems to me to be an essential ethical concept at this time, when we've suffered through almost five years of a relentless emphasis on "security." Support for the all-out "war on terror" has been (especially since 9/11) based largely on an insistence on the right to a total safety; do I need to point out that this safety is factually impossible? That nothing whatsoever can ensure an absolute safety on any scale? In the face of this, the demand for invulnerability amounts to a sociopathic paranoia. This is as true on the interpersonal scale as it is on the global. Letting vulnerability be is one way of removing oneself from power relations whose tendency is to reproduce themselves (indefinitely deferring their own impossible satisfaction), and whose consequences are brutal.

Recently, as part of an ongoing investigation of her book "The Fatalist," I watched a Kelly Writers' House talk given by Lyn Hejinian (archived on the PennSound site), in which she discusses the "open text" explicitly in terms of the contrary desire for closure, again in reference to 9/11. She identifies the need to close the narrative begun by the events of that day as one of the major political crises of our day.

Too often the idea of "openness" in poetry is oversimplified (made vague and broad) and caricatured, mostly by people who want to take a swipe at "LangPo," and can do so by not examining the actual work of those writers, but instead taking one or two sentences from an essay written in the late '70's and riffing on that. In her talk, Hejinian proposes one of many specific kinds and functions of openness (the "rejection of closure" for crucial political reasons) in poetic writing.

Openness and vulnerability. Poetry is a comparatively safe place to practice these. Even a prescriptive political poetry (isn't this an unlikely term? who will have their politics prescribed by a poem? "no-one listens to poetry") can allow its prescriptions to include their own cracks, uncertainties, provisionalities, tactical transiences, the new questions and problems raised by those very solutions offered as prescriptions. Vulnerability means maintaining a space for an active, thinking listening in the face of the insistent beat of rectitude that can only be heard and absorbed.

("no/ one listens to poetry")

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Tuesday, August 15, 2006

The Minneapolis Fringe



The Nonsense Company returned from the Minneapolis Fringe Festival a few days ago. What an amazing experience. Now in its 14th or 15th year, the 11-day festival is remarkably well-organized by great, energetic people who have a genuine interest in a wide variety of types of performance, and in the truly odd to boot. Minneapolis seems like a great town; the people who thronged to the festival tended to be open-minded and intelligent, constantly discussing what each other had seen and what was most surprising or unique. The Festival makes every attendee buy a $3 button, which they have to wear in order to get tickets to individual performances; this means that Fringegoers are immediately identifiable, which facilitates the ongoing discussion (buzz) in a smart and simple way.

Our own performance got great responses from audience members and official Fringe bloggers (my favorite is here) and sold out the last night. It took place in the lovely Theatre de la Jeune Lune, known around the city for its innovative work. All the spaces (and there were many) used in the festival were lovely, and I got to see performances in the vast majority of them. The most amazing thing about the experience (connected to everyone's mutual support) was the astonishingly high quality of the work. I probably saw seventeen performances, and only one was utterly intolerable... three were halfway-decent wastes of time, and everything else ranged from the basically worthwhile to the truly amazing, leaning more toward the latter end of the scale.

My three personal favorites:

Sock Puppet Serenade, a remarkable marionette show by Kurt Hunter. I'm puppet-friendly, but this show was remarkable in terms of its status as theater in general. The first half featured animals and animal-like things, and even there the "acting" was more precise and complex than that you'll find in most human performance. The second half, though, was the truly amazing part, featuring a cardboard box that could imitate perfectly the dance moves from the "Nutcracker" and "Riverdance," followed by an abstraction of a box (just the outline), changing shape in impossibly expressive ways, and finally a marionette that was nothing but a dress shirt with a red nose. Pretty weird for a guy who turns out to be a methodist.

Gayle Austin's Resisting the Birthmark: A Feminist Theory Play, performed by Atlanta's Twinhead Theatre. Kind of like a mid-period Yvonne Rainer film for the stage, the play is more or less a staging of Hawthorne's short story "The Birthmark" that's constantly taken over by excerpts of feminist essays about the story, as well as about literature and the role of the gendered body in theater. The acting was fantastic; there was a kind of visual flatness to the staging (almost without set), as if the distance from the audience of a given performer at a given time were meant to mimic the layering of texts and commentaries. Sharp dressers, too, these Georgians were, and great folks.

The Missoula Oblongata's The Wonders of the World: Recite is by far the hardest piece to describe. If they ever do it again, and you hear about it, go.

Tuesday, August 01, 2006

addenda and

In my last post, I should have pointed out some more notable exceptions, in the queer community, to one of the norms described there. The queer punk scene in particular features some of the most wide-ranging activism (and aesthetic open-mindedness) I've come across anywhere. The hard work, good cheer and generosity one often finds in abundance among young anarchists is rare and wonderful.

A songwriter who exemplifies the best in queer political music is Scott Free, lynchpin of the Chicago queer folk scene, who's not a young anarchist and is only sometimes a punk rocker. Last year's They Call Me Mr. Free covers more ground than just about any album of political music I've heard in years, from high school gaybashing to the Iraq war to racial profiling and the corrupt Chicago courts to the insult of "disco divas singing at PrideFest," and more, all with subtlety, thought, detail, meticulous melodic writing, better hiphop than hiphop, and heavier rock than heavy rock.

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If you're interested in more Fringe festival news, D.R. Israel blurbs the DC Fringe in a recent post.

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The hubbub started by Ron Silliman's recent post on Gabriel Gudding, which I haven't been following very carefully, brings up some issues that matter to me (Silliman loves those figures who like to generate controversy, doesn't he? Controversy by proxy?). I surely shouldn't have taken the snide little swipe at Gudding I allowed myself in Ian's comments box today, since I don't know Gudding, have barely read his writing, and haven't even gone through the controversial eight-year-old essay yet. For all I know, he is indeed a genuine sweetheart, not a new age narcissist, and a smart writer. Or not; I'm no authority. Ian's post does point to something that's concerned me since I started reading poets' blogs, though: the "anxiety of influence" among younger poets doing work that's at least broadly interesting in the U.S. (I should point out that using a phrase of Harold Bloom's here causes me some mild nausea).

The phenomenon in brief:
Poet fears being called derivative, especially where hir immediate poetic predecessors are concerned. Poet goes around describing other peoples' writing in terms of those predecessors, and talking about how "old" things are. Criticisms go back and forth. Often the anxious poet writes in a style that could also be called derivative--it's just that it's derived from styles that aren't currently part of the nexus of anxiety. This is probably a disease of "scenes," a symptom of jockeying for social status... or the result of quick and careless reading habits.

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The Minnesota Fringe festival is great; I've seen almost nothing that's dreadful, and much that's at least good, some amazing. Our own show is getting great responses, which surprises the hell out of me. People in Minneapolis apparently want to see weird art. Nice city, too. More detailed reports to follow.

Friday, July 28, 2006

The Iowa Fringe; The Political Fringe











I won’t get back to The Fatalist until the upcoming Minneapolis Fringe Festival is over.
Here’s a brief report on our trip to the Iowa Fringe in Des Moines:

The reasons for the mess that was the festival became apparent over the weekend, and I certainly find them adequate. One person, John Busbee, seemed to do almost all the work, communicating with the performers, renting the spaces (including one that had to be arranged three days before the festival, when one of the venues was shut down), sitting at the ticket/check-in table when he wasn’t running last-minute errands for people, and also doing tech for our performances (this hadn’t been the plan), as well as constantly taking phone calls from performers and ticket buyers. He did all this with a slipped disc and a calm, gentle, good-humored demeanor. Really a lovely guy. Pretty amazing, especially since he’d only been asked to organize the festival a few months before.

Attendance was low, which I’d expected (we were doing a weird, 90-minute play in a thoroughly unknown city). I hadn’t expected a truly inadequate performance space: we’d asked for a quiet room that got pitch black with the lights out, and for stereo CD playback, and we got a “gallery” with all the air compressors for the building making a loud thrumming noise overhead, and that even with the black plastic we taped up on the entire wall of windows twenty minutes before the first performance (other ensembles were doing the same in other spaces), never got dark enough for some scenes to work. There was only one speaker (luckily, we’d brought along our own ad-hoc sound system), and we had to project a lot to make this rather quiet and delicate play heard.

I’m writing all this not to make the festival look bad—John Busbee is amazing, and this is only the second year they’ve tried to do this—but to warn anyone who might be considering going to one of these: if the needs of what you’re performing are highly particular, and it doesn’t seem pretty certain that everything is taken care of, write endless emails and make endless phone calls, until you’re sure you’re getting what you need.

One problem might be that, for much of what went on at the festival (and I expect this is often the case in Fringes), the performing situation isn’t nearly as sensitive. Lame comedy improv and hysterical trauma-drama about landmark interpersonal crises can basically be heard and seen over any kind of audiovisual noise. In a way, I don’t care that the standards for theater are so low, so TV-based, in this country; I just consider it to be a different art form… but it can lead to the assumption that all portable theater is energetic fluff that can survive a really adverse setup.

All in all, though, we had a good time. I enjoy performing the piece a great deal. Des Moines is one of those rather interesting cities that’s caught between decline, gentrification, and grassroots reconstruction, as far as I can tell. Plenty of beautiful, empty old warehouse and factory buildings (any of which might have made for better performance venues than the new glass-and-metal cultural spaces that were used, and which stood starkly next to the collapsing buildings). The best part of the trip was staying in the large attic room of the Des Moines Catholic Worker house. Everyone I’ve met from CW has been amazing, and these folks were no exception: extremely generous, compassionate, funny, and often potty-mouthed, undogmatic, unprejudiced, and committed to the ethic of voluntary poverty and social justice. Having lunch every day with the large number of people who came around to get a free meal and talk was great—some fabulous talkers and generally fascinating humans of all kinds are destitute in Des Moines.

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On another note, what’s up with the inability of most progressives to include queer issues among the causes they work on and discuss? Somebody named Ishaq sent